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Truth, Pain and Sorrow - Part 12/15

Jan 27, 2011 21:15

By Kymley
About: Kevin, Scotty, Michelle, Steve, Walkers.
Rate: PG
Disclaimer: Not mine. Just messing with the characters if B&S. Steve is mine though
Summary: Kevin and Scotty see Michelle after she moved back to the city with her new boyfriend. Based after the last episode so 5.08

( Truth, Pain and Sorrow - Part 12 )

truth pain and sorrow - series, scotty, kevin, steve

Comments 12

sunnypeach January 27 2011, 21:26:38 UTC

oh boy...I hope Steve doesn't do anything even more stupid and Scotty wakes up very soon since Kevin's falling apart without him.

kymley January 28 2011, 11:43:26 UTC

I always think that Kevin will fall about without Scotty :(

srtawalker January 27 2011, 22:46:26 UTC

Oh :( Poor Kevin. I hope Scotty wake up soon.

PS: Steve McQueen? Really? :)

kymley January 28 2011, 11:44:49 UTC

Lol, I so didn't noticed that when I wrote it - wonder if I should change it now - then again I used to know someone called James Bond :)

marea67 January 27 2011, 22:58:44 UTC

Loved the Kevin/Jordan moment, as you may know, I have a LITTLE soft spot for the guy ;) but I'm ready to shoot Steve myself! :(

kymley January 28 2011, 11:53:14 UTC

Yep; me too!
I give credit to you for the Jordan being in the story - kindof got the feeling of his character from your stories :)

luna_veritas January 28 2011, 02:34:57 UTC

Oooo great chapter! Love Kevin's meltdown and Jordan comforting.

LOL! Steve McQueen - Now I know two babies wont fit on the back of the motorcycle :P

kymley January 28 2011, 11:55:11 UTC

Thanks - I really think Kevin would have a meltdown if he thought he was going to lose Scotty. Plus he is angry at Jordan as well which doesn't help - emotion are high.

I think I might have to change that surname - and it took me a while to think of one of well - my bad

luna_veritas January 28 2011, 12:12:39 UTC

No don't change it! It's a good name...and I am sure that there are more than one Steve McQueen's in this world! It in no way interferes with the fantastic story you have written here!

kymley January 28 2011, 14:16:53 UTC

Thanks for the lovely comment - I guess I'll keep it then; just kind of annoyed at myself for not realising it when I was writing lol

tiffanie39 January 28 2011, 22:40:38 UTC

I will admit that I was angry at Jordan when he first showed up with Mario & Quinn. It did feel like he was blaming Kevin and I dont blame Kevin at all for going off on them. The poor man is terrified he might loose his husband and never see his kids.

This may sound weird but I am glad that Steve's got a baby in each arm so he cant do anything to them or his dad...or can he?

kymley January 29 2011, 07:12:34 UTC

Yeah I felt the Kevin really need to blow of some steam and I like the fact I did with Jordan than his family. Plus he was already angry at him.

Haha, no idea - at the moment just keep that feeling, never know I might go as funny as some of the current SL on the show and make Steve a ninja or something, lol