"Don't make me lie to you." But what he doesn't tell her - can't tell her - is that he already has.
"Whoa! We uh, haven't even had our first date yet and you're already inviting me in." And Sara has a niggling feeling that if he wasn't a prisoner, and she wasn't his doctor - she would.
That perfectly sums up their early relationship for me. Great job!
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But what he doesn't tell her - can't tell her - is that he already has.
"Whoa! We uh, haven't even had our first date yet and you're already inviting me in."
And Sara has a niggling feeling that if he wasn't a prisoner, and she wasn't his doctor - she would.
That perfectly sums up their early relationship for me. Great job!
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"Don't make me lie to you."
But what he doesn't tell her - can't tell her - is that he already has.
That was great; really emphasises the line that was drawn between them. Lovely work!
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