Comments | kyliekay: M/S fanfic

kyliekay

M/S fanfic

Dec 20, 2006 21:57

Title: Everything
Rating: M, nothing too bad though.
Pairing: Michael/Sara

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Comments 7

heartagram_lala December 20 2006, 13:26:36 UTC

LOVED IT

kyliekay December 21 2006, 15:20:36 UTC

Thanks for the comment!

heartagram_lala December 21 2006, 15:21:52 UTC

your welcome, u deserved it.

and as a fellow writer i know how much comments make one squee haha

x_jenzy_x December 20 2006, 17:08:57 UTC

As i said last night, i love this.

"I was thinking about everything, Michael. And do you know what conclusion I came to? That I'm tired of thinking. So tonight, I'm not going to. And neither are you."
Mmm. good plan Sara. Michael and thinking seems to go together, to have someone make him forget about his brain for a second.. is a miracle..
hehe.

kyliekay December 21 2006, 15:21:22 UTC

Heh, and thank you again Jen.

xshorty24x December 23 2006, 11:02:06 UTC

Good job. I liked the kind of flash backs you used, it really added to the fic - it filled the reader in with what had happened between the Michael and Sara, and where they were at in the present. Well done!

kyliekay December 26 2006, 13:43:51 UTC

Thank you very much! :)