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kyichu

There's Nothing Wrong With Me part 4

Jul 18, 2009 00:41

A/N: So, this part took a lot of work on my part. It started out as mostly dialogue, and I hated it. I scrapped about two thirds of it and restarted. I ended up with this. And I think I fucking love it.

There’s Nothing Wrong with Me 4

Time was moving in slow motion for Billie Joe as he watched the Rev tease Fink before turning back to him. “Tell me ( Read more... )

wilhelm fink, strychnine twitch, billie joe armstrong

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kyichu July 18 2009, 05:15:13 UTC

OH MY TWITCH, THANK YOU!! You just made my night!
I was so worried about if everyone else would like it after I went through and revised everything; especially the Preacher/Devil/Sinner thing.
Oh Wifey, have some cake and cookies and other shit that you don't need but showers you in my unending gratitude!

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kyichu July 18 2009, 05:39:46 UTC

Fuck I love you! Have I told you that yet? I really do.

You can borrow pucker pouch, Sugarlump (All's fair in love and war)

I'm so glad you liked it! I was quite fond of Twitch and his chess comment. And yes, I felt like teaing you all. Wait till you see what I have in story.

We should lock your drunken swinger and my holy man in a room, tape it, and watch live performances on a regular basis. For sure.

kyichu July 18 2009, 05:41:27 UTC

Shit...my typos there are atrocious...

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saintxcharlatan July 18 2009, 05:37:07 UTC

Holy fuck, that was incredible! *applauds*
The preacher/devil/sinner scenario was brilliant :D
I think I need to be saved as well... *evil smirk*

kyichu July 18 2009, 05:40:49 UTC

After seeing how Twitchy saves his congregates, who doesn't. XD
I'm so glad you liked it! I'm really pleased that the scenario played out as well in words as it did in my mind!
Thanks so much for the comment!

21enemies July 18 2009, 06:21:05 UTC

the Rev ain't God. you are.
because this was the most fantastic thing I've ever read, and the ending was fucking amazing.

kyichu July 18 2009, 15:53:45 UTC

*Has a mild power trip after being called God*

Ok, I'm back now! And thank you, sweets! Have a huge ass huggle! *huggles*

I'm glad you like the ending. I'm certainly fond of what it leads into. *wicked smirk*

yknow_fuck July 18 2009, 07:39:13 UTC

Holy Santa Claus shit!

That was amazing, and I'm sure that I'm not the only one who needs to go take a cold shower and then have some alone time.

And I love that Fink and Twitch just can't seem to really get along with each other, it makes me laugh.

C:

kyichu July 18 2009, 15:55:22 UTC

"Holy Santa Claus Shit!"