If you're going to change the entire point/focus of a story via rewrite...
At least make said rewrite make -sense- for longer than 30 seconds of thought...
And if "Wait, why are you - if - that doesn't make sense" makes it into the dialogue from an intelligent character and said character never gets a real answer/explanation...
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If you're going to change the entire point/focus of a story via rewrite...
At least make said rewrite make -sense- for longer than 30 seconds of thought...
And if "Wait, why are you - if - that doesn't make sense" makes it into the dialogue from an intelligent character and said character never gets a real answer/explanation...
Something is -wrong-.
;_;
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Go kill something. It'll make you feel better.
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