[fic] pomegranates (3/?)

[kwritten]

fic: pomegranates
fandom: btvs/tvd/mythology (lol) (LOL)
pairing: elena/dawn (hades/persephone); bonnie, caroline, jupiter/juno, buffy/tara
word count: 5,900
summary: Hades are born, they grow, are molded. Persephone are created, plucked from the air and then hidden away. Easy to find and easy to miss.Elena ends and therefore begins. On the edge

Comments

[happyg_rl]

what the actual fuck

i don't need this. i don't have to take this abuse from you!

how about we just set all of my feelings on fire as well? oh, too late!

*sigh*

Seriously though Elena is the biggest spaz in history and I adore it. And poor Dawn is just fucking made of limbs, it must be difficult not to be constantly tangled up. Also I hate you :)

[kwritten]

This slow pacing allows for so much pain, I'm greatly enjoying it.

Elena/spaz is seriously my second favorite thing next to Elena/bitterness

[fluffyfrolicker]

hahahahahahahahahahahaha

no.

[fluffyfrolicker]

ok but also

elena/her 6 parents is something that should get explored more often, and isn't, and i love the job you're doing with it

ALSO ALSO elena/her career, the same as above really

and dawn/elena is the most precious thing to ever

did i ever tell you about the sequel to the fic i wrote for you for multigen fic, that happens in my head sometimes, where dawn and elena ~moonlight as evil!figthers and also maybe they pick up allison somewhere along the way

[kwritten]

hihi

Elena/her 6 parents is so awful and beautiful and I'm so glad that you like where I went with them.
I'm also newly obsessed with the symmetry of them
Miranda/Grayson
Isobel/John
Jenna/Alaric --- the women all researchers and the men all hunters and I just *stars in my eyes* Elena was born of books and papers and stakes and sharp things.

wrt Elena/Career - I really hope you like what comes next. Probably the next chapter Bennett will start her on a kinda cool path (I hope) (the pacing of this story is shaping up to be so bizarre)

Dawn/Elena

ALSO DAWN THE ACTUAL SALTZMAN SITTING AT A DINNER TABLE WITH ISOBEL AND ALARIC AND LAUGHING AT THEM AND SAYING TERRIBLE THINGS
WHERE IS THAT TERRIBLE SLIGHTLY INCESTY AU AND HOW CAN I GET MY HANDS ON IT?
ELENA FALLING IN LOVE WITH THIS DERPY SPAZZY YOUNGER GIRL AND THEY DATE FOR A WHILE AND THEN ISOBEL IS LIKE O_o GUYS THERE IS SOMETHING YOU PROBABLY SHOULD KNOW
GIVE IT TO ME

MORTAL INSTRUMENTS AU WHERE ELENA IS JACE AND DAWN IS CLARY AND ISOBEL IS VALENTINE AND PROBABLY AMY POND IS

[kwritten]

^^^

I would just like to remind everyone (including myself) that I once wrote a perfectly respectable fic about Dawn Summers seducing a kpop idol in a Star Wars-AU.

So if there's anyone that can pull off an Allison/Dawn/Elena Saltzman Mortal Instruments-AU with any degree of grace, it's probably me.

so please don't encourage it for the love of moses

[clockwork_hart1]

look, I came here to have a good time

no that's a lie

elena/career is my otp. she wants it all, okay. she knows what's right and what she feels in her bones and she is words and knives all in one.

PARENTAL WOE! Of COURSE alaric counts and of COURSE cordelia is another sister (by the by someone needs to give me cordy/buffy(/faith(/tara)) fic about them raising dawn alpha bitch style. actually someone just needs to give me more cordelia in this world.)

KEATS IS SUCH AN ASSHOLE LOLOLOL

F I R E

this was incoherent but then again look what you made doris do

[kwritten]

hihi YOU *blows kisses*

and she is words and knives all in one
#creys

(by the by someone needs to give me cordy/buffy(/faith(/tara)) fic about them raising dawn alpha bitch style.
at a certain point we will switch to Dawn's perspective and you will, yes, be able to see this happening. (and also learn why she's running so hot and cold. I'm hoping two more chapters of Elena's pov and then I'll switch over?)

KEATS IS THE WORST.

(lol omg poor doris)

[clockwork_hart1]

honestly hi @me whose browser keeps kicking me out of lj which is so rude but im here now so

at a certain point we will switch to Dawn's perspective and you will, yes, be able to see this happening.

GOOD. ALL MY MONEY IS YOURS

please continue being divine

[kwritten]

♥

Why does your browser hate lj?!

[snogged]

I'm sorry that it took me such a long time to read this chapter.
*hugs*

This was really wonderful and heart-breaking.

I love that Dawn is a klutz/tangle of limbs.

I love that Elena calls Keats a bastard. I also love the exploration of Elena's career options and her parental angst.

I'm hoping you post more of this soon. :)

[kwritten]

I'm so sorry it took me so long to respond to this comment!!!! You are the sweetest and the best!

Also it's so great to hear that you liked this chapter!

Dawn/klutzhood 5eva

Yay! I'm glad you liked the take I am trying to explore with Elena's career. I felt as though the show did all of that a huge disservice in order to ~plot

I'm hoping you post more of this soon. :)
*sigh* I would love nothing more than have the time/space to get back to this. Maybe January?