[fic] let's sing a song of all the mistakes we should have made (2/4?)

[kwritten]

fic: let's sing a song of all the mistakes we should have made (2/4?)
fandom: victorious + sam and cat
pairing: tori/cat(/andre); jade/beck(/andre); robbie/trina(/andre); ot7 polyamory (past cat/sam)
word count: 2,800
recipient: killing_kurare and smells_corrupt for her constant inspiration
prompt: lovesong (I swear it will get there, I super promise)
setting: eight years

Comments

[smells_corrupt]

SO THIS CONTINUES TO BE AWESOME AND HOLY SHITTTTTT THE BROTHER THING THAT IS SO GREAT I LOVE IT I LOVE THAT IT WAS HER MOTHER'S DELUSION AND CAT FED INTO IT PROBABLY BECAUSE SHE DIDN'T KNOW HE WASN'T REAL UNTIL SHE WAS OLDER AND BY THEN SHE WASN'T QUITE SURE SO SHE JUST KEPT IT UP AND SUNK INTO THE PERSONA WHEN SHE WAS FEELING THREATENED/SCARED I LOVE THIS I'M GOING TO THE CHAPTER 3 NOW

[kwritten]

AND HOLY SHITTTTTT THE BROTHER THING THAT IS SO GREAT
oh good I am soooo glad, this was the part that I was worried about?!!?

[killing_kurare]

Sorry I didn't read earlier. :/
This chapter (or the whole fic by far) leaves me a little confused. But if we look at the theme, the happenings and the character it just underlines it all. :-D so basically it's a good thing. And overall I'm able to follow the plot, piece for piece making more sense, just like a puzzle (maybe it's not helping I'm not a native English speaker._.)
This may not sound as good as I mean it, sorry.
No, I really like the fic and the way it puzzles me is a good thing for it makes me think and feel a little like the characters.
I have no idea what I'm trying to say... Sorry, but be sure I LIKE IT!
Edit: totally forgot to mention that wtf-moment when that issue with the brother came up! Damn! Genius!

[kwritten]

I'm sorry you are confused! HOW CAN I HELP!? I know a lot of what they are talking about is a little cryptic. If there's something that isn't clear, it probably is revealed later in another chapter. A lot is spoken about early, but shown later.

[clockwork_hart1]

What can teens really do about the things in the world that harm them?

IM SO DONE WITH YOU!!!

Funny how ‘just bipolar’ can suddenly be a relief.

God i know.

okay so. how dare you about all of this.

The look Trina gave her could kill. There was something here she was missing and she didn’t like the feeling that was playing a role in a story she didn’t know the ending to.

i have friends with issues as bad as mine and you just want to leave and not deal with it and pretend like your own little world is the only bit that matters and its HARD. UGH. it's hard.

also: CAAAAT. (lol i dont even go here. why are you dong this to my feelings.)