AU fic cherish ch.11b

[kusanobabe05]

Fic Title: Cherish
Title: Ch. 11b
Pairings: tegomass, koyashige, hints of pairings to come
JE Groups: NewS
Genre: AU
Rating: R for the usual reasons- sex, language and violence.
Notes: Don’t kill me if you hate it… it is my first real attempt at an AU fic series. You'll need tissues...sorry...

Characters:

Koyama Keiichiro- Kei, the dad
Koyama Tomahisa-

Comments

[x3lala]

omg. how... SWEET! :D

[kusanobabe05]

Chotto mate...nan daiyo.

Wait where did the sweet come from?

[x3lala]

... xD i was supposed to say traumatising ne?

but but. YAMAPI + KUSANO. i'm not a big kusanopi fan but. WOW. xD so SWEET. yet traumatising.

[kusanobabe05]

okay I get it now...sorry I just hate myself for this chapter...it wasn't supposed to be that evil.

[snow_meow]

Now I understand why you cannot write RyoPi. LOL

From the way you wrote this it sounds like it will be RyoUchi and KusaPi. ^__^

I guess as long as Ryo and Pi are happy, I'm fine with it.

It's sad when characters are unhappy, in angst mode or suffering.

[kusanobabe05]

I know...I didn't mean for it to get so bad for notti. It got out of control.

[yuyako16]

OMG!!
so good..
good thing that pi was there to take [no! not take. but lessen] notti's pain..

and more nottipi and ryouchi moments..
onegai!!
i'm starting to love them too..
ahaha.. XD

and i hope yuya is okay now..
ahaha.. XD
[we're the same! i have asthma as well.. nyaha!!]

[kusanobabe05]

I'm so glad that I write nottipi and ryouchi so you like them.

Massu won't let anything happen to Tesshi, he'd hate himself for it and Shige would probably kill him.

[yuyako16]

hai!!
i love them..
ahaha.. XD

and you're right..
massu would definitely make sure that yuya is alright ne?
ahaha.. XD

[kusanobabe05]

I don't think Massu could handle losing Tesshi either in my fics or in real life. I think they're too close for Massu to take it well.

[sashyacute]

OMG!!!!

ILUSM!!!!

this fic is getting better and better!!!! Though this chap breaks my heart cause I can't stand seeing notti like that... but it's great!!!

[kusanobabe05]

I never intended for him to be that traumatized. It just happened, Notti will need lots of therapy after this.

[arisa_draconis]

turning ryopi to kusapi now are we? and ryouchi too... :(

oh well... update! i had to read around 4 chapters to catch up since i didnt check the fic for a few days... gomen!

[kusanobabe05]

I'm glad you like even if it's a little bit...I did say I had a plan. Both ryo and Yamapi needed people who needed them and could learn to love them. I think I sowed the seeds of that.