Oh no, 'Soka's writing again...

[kurosaki_koi]

Beware of horrible writing.  Still, a promise is a promise, no matter how late it is - so nya.

Fandom:  TeniPuri
Title:  Anything that can...
Pairing:  Golden Pair (Oishi/Kikumaru)
Rating:  G
Warnings:  Very bad writing - nothing really other than that. ^^;;
Notes:  Christmas Gift!Fic for my Oishi, aka hughes_maes .  The prompt was 'The worst date ever.'  I hope I

Comments

Alright! Reviewing in order as I read this!

[amyused]

Right from the bat, I loved this! XD It's always fun reading about Kikumaru sibling dynamics!

Woah, high-roller to be able to afford a cab in Tokyo. XD; I'd probably just take the train and be late. But, I love the Oishi-worry-logic! <3

Wow... XD That really does sound like a bad day. What jerky taxi people! DX Still, I'm glad they could just laugh it off at the end! XD <3 <3

Thank you!!! I loved the fic! :3

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[kurosaki_koi]

Hence why it took every last cent of his savings ^^;;;; And he had to take the cab because he was already late and knew that Oishi would be pulling out what little hair he had already.

I'm glad you liked it!!!! I was really really super worried about it. ^^;;;;;;;;; Hope it met expectations?

Now that you were the first to read it - mind if I post it to the TeniPuri comms?

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[amyused]

Poor Oishi, he worries so much. ;_; <3 Loving worry, though, so I guess that's okay.

I loved it! It's a marvelous Christmas present!!! <3

And feel free to spread it around! :D <3

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[kurosaki_koi]

Though Eiji gets annoyed with it, he also finds it quite endearing - so he can't complain too much. ^^;;;

I'm glad, I really was nervous about it. My writing has gone down hill lately.

Will do - thank you for your permission <3 Just remember it's still yours~ <3<3

[nobeansprout]

Flow and narration are smooth as far as I can tell.
Good job. <3

[kurosaki_koi]

Thanks. I was a bit worried about flow and wording x.x; Your ficcie is next!

[nobeansprout]

:3!
-gladly waits-

[kurosaki_koi]

lol - I'm honestly having a hard time with it. I had a good plot set up for it in my head... but I didn't type it out so now I'm at ground zero again @.@

[breyzyyin]

You write really well! I like how the story just kind of flows. :D

[kurosaki_koi]

Nya! Thank you for your praise!!! I really was worried about this fic. I rewrote it like....six times >.>;

[fayth_flame]

Aw, too cute~! Hooray for best worst date ever. XD

And haha, Oishi's snowball thinking... black market auction. Pfft~

[kurosaki_koi]

It's how Oishi thinks. He skips past the easy stuff and goes straight for the worst case option.

Glad you liked it ^^;;;

[youlooksofine]

This was cute. :)

[kurosaki_koi]

Thank you~! ^^;;; Glad you enjoyed it~! <3