Before the Dawn - chp. 4

[kurokitsune09]

TITLE:  Before the Dawn
RATING: PG to PG-15ish?
PAIRING/FOCUS: Jongho (Main), Cheundong/Krystal (sub) [others to be determined]
GENRE: ...adventure, au, romance?
NOTES: [[Okay, the last like portion or so is essentially Demoted but I added a little bit, changed a little bit so read if you want. Don't read if you want. It's basically the same thing

Comments

[kurokitsune09]

SPOT! Wifey alicedelusion

[alicedelusion]

i can never get over the last part, of being demoted from lord westfall to the guild's pet. <3

I love this chapter, wifey <3
(and you >.<)

and the part jonghyun shutted joon up because minho's sleeping! <3333 CUTEEEEE. Though, I do pity Joon ;A;

[kurokitsune09]

Aww! Thank you wifey! o///o ^^ I love you too!! <33333

*nod nod* Jonghyun's pet needs to rest/sleep. SHHH! No noise. lol.

I was trying to get demoted into this chapter and it didn't seem to work out at the beginning but it slowly came together as I typed. lol.

[kurokitsune09]

SPOT for Unnie! crazyoverbishie

[crazyoverbishie]

claimed my spot..XXDD

haaa~
I like how you make Jonghyun all bubbly to hide his scary side and Minho fierce till the end...i kinda think that it was Jonghyun who was actually fall in love with Minho, n i feel like Minho soon(?)will pawned/topped Jonghyun despite him being the petXD

this chapter is GREAT and i LOVE it

pls do write more, ill be waiting for another GREAT chapter from you^^

[kurokitsune09]

Aww sankyuu! Told you I'd start leaving spots for you Unnie. <33333

I liked the whole I'mg going to hide my true self behind the facade of an idiot thing. Jjong probably cares more for Minho than he really thinks about it and Minho, well, he's a little bit stubborn. lol.

*blushes at praise of chapter* it's not that great. some parts seemed quite choppy to me. lol. I shall try my best to update soon unnie!

[crazyoverbishie]

yeah..im thankful that you left me a spot..XXDD..btw i was the first to comment rite..XXDD

Yeah, i wanna see how Jjong actually let the facade fall in front of Minho..XXDD then it would be Minho's cue to be all caring...XXXDDD

hahaha..but it's great...i read every lines you know..thats how much i love your fic...XXDD

yeah do your best...XXXDDD

[doomedpassion]

That was cute!

[kurokitsune09]

Thanks for commenting! Glad you liked the chapter!

[praia06]

okay my head is spinning so for now I have to set an end to my newest addiction; this fic!

I'm not against magic and stuff (I love Lotr that's why) but I never knew I would like JongHo in such a plot... I'm surprised and it speaks for you bb!!

I liked Jjong's transformation from that giddy boy to the immensely strong chief with the dark past! idiotic puppy is adorable but sometimes you need a real man! this does not exclude caring for your beloved one ;)

and I do hope that Minho will show more of his feelings for Jonghyun in the upcoming chaps...

[praia06]

forgot!

a lot of things from DEMOTED made more sense now knowing the background story :) so it was quite nice reading that part again...

[kurokitsune09]

haha. yay! I'm glad you like the plot. It was something I wanted to really try. It made me happy. Although missing bunnies do not right now. *sigh*

I think everyone is waiting for Kick-Ass Jjong. To be honest, so am I. that bunny has been missing for ages now. *sigh*

Minho will. He will. Because Jjong means more to him than he knows. *nod nod*

[praia06]

I'll eagerly wait for it to happen! cold minho showing his "I'm gonna melt all your hearts with this shit romance" - side!

and your absolutely right! we're waiting for Kick-Ass-Jjong (gonna quote this from now on XD).
although I can't imagine little puppy getting wild and merciless ...unless it's with minho in certain circumstances... :P