Before the Dawn - chp. 3
TITLE: Before the Dawn
RATING: PG to PG-15ish?
PAIRING/FOCUS: Jongho (Main), Cheundong/Krystal (sub) [others to be determined]
GENRE: ...adventure, au, romance?
NOTES: Eh...I think this seemed a little bit rushed and I didn't mean for it to turn out the way it did. lol. I think Taemin seemed to be the focus of this chapter but oh well.
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RATING: PG to PG-15ish?
PAIRING/FOCUS: Jongho (Main), Cheundong/Krystal (sub) [others to be determined]
GENRE: ...adventure, au, romance?
NOTES: Eh...I think this seemed a little bit rushed and I didn't mean for it to turn out the way it did. lol. I think Taemin seemed to be the focus of this chapter but oh well.
PLOT AND CAST ( Read more... )
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PET.
RETURNS.
HOME.
8D
/spazzes.
/faints.
/mouth wide open.
/fly goes in.
/gets up and chokes.
/eventually dies.
wifeyyyyyyyy~ ;D the next chapter is the demoted part, right? nekooooo~ :3
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i'll try that when i reach home.
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i almost missed it by leaving a new comment...XDD
onto the comment..
wwhhoooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa....wwhhoooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa... someone sounds fierce here...Taemin sure can threat whoever endanger his guild-chief..XXDD.. i love this taemin..XXDD
i love Jonghyun's bubbly attitude...XXDD...he looks more like a pet than Minho...esp. when he just woke up..XXXDDD
hmmnn..your ending is intriguing..XD...i wonder what will happen next..XXDD
pls do write more...^^
surry im late to comment^^
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Taeminnie sound's amazing! I liked writing that. <333 Thank you. I loved this Taemin too. He was amazing in my head. Just hat to put that Taemin on paper.
Jonghyun does seem more like the pet doesn't he? So bubbly and "I'm going to hug you because you can't stop me" type a deal and Minho's all "get off me. PLEASE" lol.
No worries. Not late and all unnie. <33333
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yeah...Jnghyun is way too bubbly..XXDDD..Minho needs to be more fiercer...XXXDDD
btw i havent thk you for the spot..XD..thk you^^
what did i do to have this honor????
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You flatter me. I don't think it's that well written. lol.
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It is so nice to see how Jong annoys Minho XD And the whole plot is just sooo entertaining? I think I'm already addicted to it D:
Just to think that I have only two more chaps to read makes me feel desperate for more XD
So I guess that's it 8D I'll keep reading now *-*'
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I tried to make it as entertaining as I could and I must say that for a little bit, I think Jongho is going to be a little bit rocky, but I have to work with my plot bunnies to get that to work right away. They've all like, run away. The plotbunnies I mean. lol.
Thx for commenting! I hope to hear more from you! (no pressure lol. ^^)
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well taemin appeared a bit dark in this chap... but woohooo. like it cos it's not that typical "I'M THE CUTE MAKNAE IMAGE"!
but on the other side
“Children! My pet’s hungry!”
what? there's a certain image I have in my mind rn... jjong flailing his hands. making big gestures, floating through the rooms and calling his "children" with that sing-song voice... GAY!!!
i'm curious about what went wrong...
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Don't you love Jjongie? keke. calling the guild his children. it was cute when I typed it. ^^
ROTFL at the image in your head. That's funny ^^ *hugs*
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