Proof that I'm losing it

[kuroimegami]

He sucked idly on one end of his cigarette, dark green focused on the blazing end, lids twitching ever-so-often as smoke drifted into his face. He sat there for a moment, slouched in his seat, letting his mind fade in that haze of empty dreams. But solace was snatched from him abruptly- he whined softly, lifting off the chair, lips trying to follow

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[wishmasterfuuma]

"to settle again the white"

Did you mean 'against'?

I see what you mean by imagery-centric, like, damn. But I will have to agree with those silly ff.net reviewers and say it looks like an ending but doesn't feel like an ending; so I want more. I feel like we're missing something. Unless that was your aim?...

But I likes it~~

[kuroimegami]

...yus, that is obviously what I meant. Shush you. >.>;;

I know, right? XD

And it's not supposed to feel like an ending. 'Cause. The only ending these two are getting is one of them dying. But you can't continue that kind ofpiece in the same writing style too well. >.> =D?