"Surreality", oneshot, ReitaxRuki

Nov 17, 2007 19:34

Title: "Surreality"
Chapters: 1/1 (oneshot)
Author: kuroi_fuyu (aka frozenstream)
Genre: romance, angst
Warnings: none really
Rating: PG-13
Bands: the GazettE
Pairings: ReitaxRuki --though it can be whoever you want to pair Ruki with--
Synopsis: How much pain is it possible to endure?
Disclaimers: they're under my bed don't own T__T

Comments: from Ruki's POV ( Read more... )

genre: romance, band: gazette, rating: pg-13, rukix??, type: fic, reitaxruki, genre: angst

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Gabe anonymous November 17 2007, 18:53:00 UTC
Oh god.. this was... beautiful *-*

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Re: Gabe kuroi_fuyu November 18 2007, 13:55:56 UTC
aww, thank you~!! *o*

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momiji_manjuu November 17 2007, 19:10:04 UTC
I'm really glad I read this XD I thought it was going to have a sad ending, but was pleasantly surprised. Absolutely lovely <333

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kuroi_fuyu November 18 2007, 13:58:50 UTC
I'm really glad you read it too! :D and that you liked it^_^
Yea, first it was going to be a sad ending actually o.o but then.. I just couldn't do that to Ruki^^;
Thank you so much for reading!^_^

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sakuraxakai November 17 2007, 19:30:35 UTC
wonderfully captured emotions ;o;
writing from somebody's pov somehow makes story more intensified,
more personal.. I like this <3

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kuroi_fuyu November 18 2007, 14:00:31 UTC
oh wow, thank you so much! O.O
I was in the middle of angsting so it was easy for me to relate to Ruki and so his POV felt natural^^
It's good to hear it wasn't the wrong choice :)
Thank you so much for reading!^_^

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_hakushi November 17 2007, 21:08:47 UTC
Well written!! Writing from another's pov is hard, but I think you managed really well~ <3

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kuroi_fuyu November 18 2007, 14:01:50 UTC
gah, thank you~ *o*
I was so afraid since I've never written anything from someone's POV!
Thank you for reading! :)

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anonymous November 17 2007, 22:03:41 UTC
that was so sweet
me like it very much
you have to write more of that, don't dare to stop here!!

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kuroi_fuyu November 18 2007, 14:05:46 UTC
This was kinda experimental to me, the POV and tense.
So it makes me happy that you liked!^^
I'll try to provide you more :) we'll see if the muses co-operate, heh^^
But thank you so much for reading :)

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