"The Last Straw", oneshot, ReitaxRuki

Jun 21, 2009 04:42

Title: "The Last Straw"
Chapters: 1/1 (oneshot)
Author: kuroi_fuyu (aka frozenstream)
Genre: drama
Warnings: some violence, language
Rating: PG-13
Bands: the GazettE
Pairings: ReitaxRuki
Synopsis: ”You're not the kid I knew”, he said, disappointment clear in his voice.
Disclaimers: In my room, fighting over the last gummibear not mine T__T

”Excuse me?” )

band: gazette, rating: pg-13, type: fic, genre: drama, reitaxruki

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damono_hito June 21 2009, 16:13:29 UTC
Oh my god... That was... It was amazing. 8---D
Your way of writing is awesome! It's like... easy to read? XD

But I was wondering... Are you gonna write a sequel to this? I would definitely read it! :'''D Smut? *q*

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kuroi_fuyu July 5 2009, 21:20:31 UTC
Oh, thank you~ *_*
wow, you really think so? o.o thank you if so! I'm really insecure about my writing and have never thought of myself as a good writer^^; you're actually the second person to tell me that it's easy to read xD

Hmm.. I don't know. I haven't been feeling too inspired to write lately^^; but I can consider it :D but about it being smut I cannot say anything ;D

Anyway, thank you so much for reading and commenting^^

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limaccia_san June 21 2009, 17:47:01 UTC
Wow O_O that was intense..I loved it.. Rei is so disappointed, not just angry at Ruki's behavior but..like he misses his old Ruki.. or maybe it's just me..
Anyway it was great and I dare to say inspiring..

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kuroi_fuyu July 5 2009, 21:16:46 UTC
No no, you're totally right! He does miss his old Ruki and that's the main reason for his outburst. He'd been holding it inside for too long^^;
Wow. Thank you so much *_* I'm glad to hear that it pleased you!
Thank you for reading and commenting!^^

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angelzli June 21 2009, 23:35:46 UTC
aww! i almost wanted to cry at the ending ;_; ya, i think that too...that he misses his old Ruki. poor Reita *hugs Rei* i luvd this, ty much XD

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kuroi_fuyu July 5 2009, 21:14:51 UTC
aww~ I'm sorry about that T_T
He really does miss his old Ruki, you're right^^;
yay~ I'm glad you did!^^ thank you for reading and commenting!^^

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xxsugarpainxx June 22 2009, 00:13:53 UTC
omfg i love it!!! *__* the only complain: wish it was sth longer >> xD

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kuroi_fuyu July 5 2009, 21:13:37 UTC
Sorry^^; I tend to write kinda short stuff, I've noticed xD;
But I'm glad you liked it otherwise^^
Thank you for reading and commenting :3

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eon98 June 22 2009, 04:35:15 UTC
oooo........I like it a lot. Okay I lied...I love it. This was great ^^.

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kuroi_fuyu July 5 2009, 21:12:54 UTC
I'm so glad to hear that you think so *-*
Thank you so much for reading and commenting^^

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