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Fic: The Lengths One Will Go Chapter Three

Oct 11, 2008 09:49

The Lengths One Will Go

By: Kuroi Atropos

Disclaimer: Kubo Tite owns Bleach. I am a lowly, broke fan.

Warnings: Mayuri worst case scenario, enough said. Really, though, this thing is going to be long and it gets a little… gruesome, in parts.

Summary: What happens when Ichigo discovers Mayuri and Uryuu's disappearance are connected?

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the lengths one will go, bleach, fic

Comments 6

nehalenia October 11 2008, 21:05:28 UTC

Eeeee! A new chapter! *runs off to read*

nehalenia October 11 2008, 21:33:14 UTC

Ahhhhhh! OMG that was so exciting! You really do action and suspense well, and I can't believe this cliff-hanger you left us with! Renji finding Ishida was just great, Hollow!Ichigo's voice was wonderful, and the implications that all Ichigo's friends are their "toys". I can't wait to read more.

I think you might want to post this (or links to this) on the comms ishi_ichi and bleach_yaoi (check their rules before you post), and heck, maybe even renishi given this latest chapter. I definitely think more people should see this.

kuroi_atropos October 16 2008, 20:10:56 UTC

Thanks for the vote of confidence! I meant to post it at a few places but I don't have my own internet and the coffee shop I was at kept having problems!! It's really evil... I'm just getting to post it on other sites today.

The thing with posting it is I'm still not sure what the final pairings are going to be, so I don't want to post it somewhere and have it not fit! -_-*

Thank you so much again!

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kuroi_atropos October 29 2008, 02:17:43 UTC

Thank you so much! You don't have to worry about this being over soon, it will be going for a while. I already have roughs of several other chapters! ^_^

I'm glad I gave it a twist you enjoyed, and hoped you liked Nemu going out with a bang.

lady81bird October 29 2008, 21:26:13 UTC

Oh God, can you write combat! I'm rather incoherent now since I've just finished reading the chapter and am still coming down from the high, but oh, oh, oh God! Whatever will happen next, just this chapter has made your fic one of my Bleach favourites.
Thank you for writing and sharing!

kuroi_atropos October 31 2008, 04:48:42 UTC

EEEEEEEE!!!!!! Excuse me... Thank you very much for your comment, I was really glad to hear that you liked the combat especially since Bleach is so combat oriented.

Did you catch the 4th chapter from Tuesday? It's a link to ff.net since the chapter was too long to post on lj.

Again, thank you so much for the review and I'm glad I could give you a fic high!! ^_^