[secret santa] The Persistence of Memory (part 1)

[kupodesu]

TITLE: The Persistence of Memory (part 1)
AUTHOR: kupodesu/Mandee
RECIPIENT: museofepics 
GENRE: Romance, fluff, bits of angst
RATINGS/WARNINGS: PG-13, non-explicit sex. 
SUMMARY: In which America promises England the most romantic Christmas he's ever had, provided he gets back in time, and England's dreams are stranger than they seem
NOTES: The original prompt was ;

Comments

[osco_blue_fairy]

This is really interesting! I like the mixture of the surreal dreams with the snapshots of ordinary life w/ Arthur while trying to adjust to being in a new relationship.

Eagerly awaiting more! <3

[kupodesu]

Thank you, I'm glad that you enjoyed it! ♥ I'm really glad the surreal dreams thing didn't come off to confusing or out of place :D

[museofepics]

Oh, wow. When I wrote that prompt, I knew I was kind of vague and I was interested in seeing how someone would interpret that, and you did it beautifully. I love the interaction between America and England both in real life and dreams and everything in here is written so amazingly. I absolutely love it.

“I miss you,” America whispered quietly into England’s ear.

And that was the moment England realised he was dreaming.

Raargh. (This means 'you broke my heart yet you have my unconditional love' in dinosaur.)

[kupodesu]

OH MAN I am so incredibly relieved that you like it! This prompt, I admit, both attracted and puzzled me the most and took me a quite some time to wrestle a semi-coherent plot out of it. fldksjfaewla you are going to make me grow an ego, thank you so much and I'm glad you enjoyed ♥

Naargh o///o ('Aw shucks, anytime o///o', in dinosaur ♥)

[midori_lover]

Oh. wow.

The way you wrote this was really amazingly beautiful * A *. This was both sweet yet kinda heartbreaking at the same time ; w ;. Will wait for more!

[kupodesu]

Thank you bb! I'm really flattered and glad you enjoyed this <3

[cyanclouds]

That was so beautiful! Your writing was just so fluid and smooth and yet simple. I love it! And also, the ending, oh. ;_; I really can't wait for the next part! Poor England!

Ahh I am so jealous of your writing! <3

[kupodesu]

Ah, thank you! ♥ I'm glad you think that, my writing style for this was something I'd worried about quite a bit ffff. D-don't worry, things will pick up ;w;

♥

[kupodesu]

Heh, thank you bb <3 I am proud, in a way, that it managed to mess with your mind a bit? :D I'm glad you enjoyed!