Well, I for one am quite grateful that Ande bushwhacked you. :-) That was a fun take on bonding fic, and I enjoyed various little touches right through the story. Fun stuff.
Thank you very much! As I said, it wasn't supposed to be a bonding fic, but Ande laughed at me and basically implied that any story I wrote would have to be one, whether I intended to or not! LOL
That was so wonderful! I loved the story plot, loved Blair's internal comments about Jim's driving and his pissiness and the sulking. And I really, really enjoyed the bonding aspect, and your description of how Jim felt when he was using his senses. And the smut, yay! So glad you were ambushed into participating. *g*
Yes, Blair made me laugh and laugh while I wrote this. He really does love Jim, but his sly sense of humor shows that he knows Jim and still loves the whole man.
Since Jim insisted on bonding, I decided that the smut would have to forward the plot, and I'm glad to see that it didn't get in the way. Have sex and save the world! Yay! LOL
That was seriously cool - I love 'bonding' fics and this was a great addition to the genre. You paid such good attention to the small details and constructed a very interesting scenario that I found very satisfying to read. The epilogue was seriously hot too, woof! ::wink::
thank you so much for sharing, thank andeincascade for surprise volunteering you, and keep penning,
I'm a bonding fic junkie, too. There's too many stories in my closet for me to hide in there anymore! LOL
I'm glad you enjoyed the details and the story line, Jim was insistent that the whole must hang together AND that he get some in the end. He's a tough customer to please... good thing he's got Blair. ;-)
Ooh - luverly *g* So nice to see a new story from you, and a nice juicy bonding fic at that. Thanks for posting and thanks to andeincascade for persuading you to do it. *g*
I loved this! A neat twist on the bonding theme. Nicely plotted and played out. Hawt sex. The only thing missing from my own personal point of view is...oh hell, you know what it is!! *wink* LOL I could pick out 2-3 places where one or both of them should get a good spanking!!
That Ande...what an instigator!! go Ande! And go you!! It's soo nice to read a new TS fic from you! ::twirls you::
I just realized that I've somehow missed replying to your comment! Bad KFN, spankings for me! LOL
I've been trying to visualize where the spanking would go... certainly in the epilogue, but where before? Would Jim take Blair over his knee in the truck after the phone number incident? would Blair teach Jim some manners in the bull-pen on their first day? If this was a maaaaa fic, where would the spanking be?
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Since Jim insisted on bonding, I decided that the smut would have to forward the plot, and I'm glad to see that it didn't get in the way. Have sex and save the world! Yay! LOL
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Sounds a lot more fun than "save the cheerleader, save the world". *bg*
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thank you so much for sharing, thank andeincascade for surprise volunteering you, and keep penning,
Marns
~pN
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I'm glad you enjoyed the details and the story line, Jim was insistent that the whole must hang together AND that he get some in the end. He's a tough customer to please... good thing he's got Blair. ;-)
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Ooh - luverly *g* So nice to see a new story from you, and a nice juicy bonding fic at that. Thanks for posting and thanks to andeincascade for persuading you to do it. *g*
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That Ande...what an instigator!! go Ande! And go you!! It's soo nice to read a new TS fic from you! ::twirls you::
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I've been trying to visualize where the spanking would go... certainly in the epilogue, but where before? Would Jim take Blair over his knee in the truck after the phone number incident? would Blair teach Jim some manners in the bull-pen on their first day? If this was a maaaaa fic, where would the spanking be?
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