The leaves are extra frail today. Nothing I've done all day's gone right. So I probably shouldn't have updated January but since I promised myself I would, I did.
Oh dear, well I always say when I'm having a bad day, "this too soon shall pass"... or rather, some variation of that. Tomorrow's going to be much better.
Okay. So I finally got around to reading the latest on January. I especially liked the bit with the brass gargoyle...how Hermione played with it, then Harry, then it got knocked down as Harry dashed out. A piece of criticism I might offer is the conversation near the end where both Harry and Hermione are eager to tell each other something. Not that it was conducted badly or anthing. I just feel like their respective subjects could've been discussed at more length before they hopped into each others arms. As it comes off now, their reactions are in keeping with the significance of each event, but it seems to me like their characters would linger on them more both in speech and thought
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Read and loved the update by the way.
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