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jeauexe October 8 2007, 13:49:10 UTC
この胸の中に is like inside my heart. Roughly.

Thanks for translating~

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kumikuri October 8 2007, 22:25:32 UTC
Thank you~ That's what I thought but yeah, I was just kind of wondering if it would sound funny D:

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masuda_takahits October 8 2007, 14:02:26 UTC
Thanks for posting those!
I just checked where you left in Japanese.

この胸の中に would be okay to be translated to "in my heart."
Maybe you know this phrase means literally "in this chest", but 胸 in Japanese also means one's heart, and "this" must mean the main person in this lyrics that "my" would be better.

Then about もっともっと強く今日をやきつけて, やき(焼き)つける is used to mean, for example, "branding" or "printing photos".
Here it may be used to express "let me keep today's memory in my mind strongly" (like printing photos), then if I choose words for lyrics and translate more freely, for example, how about "give me more memories of you today"?

As I am not good at English instead, please find better words if I could help you to understand the meaning of them.

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kumikuri October 8 2007, 22:23:58 UTC
Ahhh I see~ Thank you for the explanation :D I had a feeling it was something along the lines of that, but I wasn't sure XD;;

It's still kind of hard to word it right, but your ideas helped :)

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chibimaruu October 8 2007, 15:45:58 UTC
;________;!!!

Days is so beautiful♥

Thank you so much for translating this~

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biconne October 8 2007, 16:37:00 UTC
Hmm i dunno I would translate この胸の中に as "inside this heart"

As for Daysもっともっと強く今日をやきつけて masuda_takahits translation is the best.

Daysもっともっと強く今日をやきつけて
let me keep today's memory in my mind strongly
to keep these Days more and more in my mind <- thats how I see it in English. Though I think replacing more with longer is better context but "motto" is put in twice ><

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kumikuri October 8 2007, 22:27:39 UTC
Thank you for helping~ ♥
Using "more and more" might be a bit more literal though, since it keeps a bit more of the original lyrics within the translation.

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sweetmilano90 October 8 2007, 17:03:22 UTC
Thank you for posting! This song made me cry. :'(

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