Jealousy ~ Boku wo mite yo! - Ch.1

Dec 04, 2009 16:10

Title: Jealousy ~ Boku wo mite yo!
Chapter Title: Scandal
Pairing: KoyaPi
Genre: Romance
Rating: G
Disclaimer: People can't own other people. Well, except for Johnny Kitagawa-san...
Summary: A gossip article may reveal some hidden feelings.
A/N: English's not my mother language. Rating might get higher.

“That’s unexpected, ne?” Tegoshi giggled. )

fanfiction, multi-chapter, group: news, pairing: koyapi, rating: g, johnny's entertainment

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Comments 13

onariah December 4 2009, 16:10:31 UTC
Yeah the plot is interesting! I love it!!
And I think you described very well Pi's and Keii's feeling.

Thanks for sharing. Hope to read more soon~

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kumiko_yamapi December 4 2009, 17:36:13 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting!!
I'll try to update as soon as possible! ^-^

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droot December 4 2009, 17:49:49 UTC
Kei-chan going angry at Yamapi made me so sad! T_T It's not his usual self... It was almost shocking since he is said to be so caring with his friends!
Anyway!, I really enjoy reading it!
Hopefully, Koyama is going to change thanks to his best friend! ^^

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kumiko_yamapi December 4 2009, 17:58:24 UTC
Yeah, I'd be shocked too if I saw Kei-chan angry. But love makes people do things they don't usually do, right? ^-^
I'm sure his best friend will help him!
Thanks for your comment!! =D

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aida_pi December 4 2009, 21:20:22 UTC
Just yourself. Your sunny, nice, caring, funny and smart self. Your endless member-ai. Your way of always caring for others. Your ability to reassure with just one smile. Your big, loving heart.

yes2!! that the reason i love kei-chan soo much!!
uwaaahhhh... my ichiban n nichiban pairing!! koyapi!! T_T
*cries of happiness*
moaarr!!~
:D

aaawww,i can fell wht pi fell when kei-chan said those things...
bad kei kei for saying like that...
pi hurt so much if he even have a crush on kei chan too *faint*

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kumiko_yamapi December 5 2009, 05:49:31 UTC
I think that's the reason why we all love Koyamama! =D
I'm happy you like this pairing!!
Thank you for reading and commenting!! ^-^

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aida_pi December 5 2009, 10:04:22 UTC
yes... im sooo into kei chan after i've seen a lot of his sweet and kindness moment...
kyaaaa!!!
kei chan!~
ganbare!
pi,like him too... :D

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cariad_82 December 4 2009, 21:59:54 UTC
Yay for angry Kei-chan (I love it when characters act against their usual behaviour^^).

And I definitely want to read more!!!

And about the mistakes:
"Maybe more that he cares for the rest of us."

Should be more than and not more that, I think. ^^

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kumiko_yamapi December 5 2009, 05:54:22 UTC
I like when characters act in a different way too.
I'm working on the second chapter. Hopefully I'll be able to post it in a couple of days!!
Thank you for reading and commenting!! ^-^
PS: Thank you! I really hadn't noticed that mistake. Rushing to correct it! =D

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dorayaki_chan December 7 2009, 07:33:20 UTC
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmh cute

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kumiko_yamapi December 7 2009, 09:34:34 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting!! ^-^

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