Bandom: Stop There And Let Me Correct It

[kueble_fic]

Title: Stop There And Let Me Correct It
Fandom: Bandom
Pairing: Mark Hoppus/Tom DeLonge (minor: Pete/Ashlee, Brendon/Spencer)
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 6,148
Summary: He's is such a complete and utter douchebag.
Notes: Thanks to ohnoscarlett for the beta. She puts up with all my horrible spelling. *facepalm* Also, this is my first Blink fic, so please be

Comments

[anonymous]

So Awesome! :D

[kueble]

Thank you :D

[citibyrd]

Oh man, this is AWESOME. Pining and hotness and being jealous of Pete Wentz! I really loved all the details that showed how well they knew each other, too. Ugh, boys in love. ♥!

[kueble]

Thank you! There's a possibility I was going to link this to you via Twitter last night but then figured it would bring my perviness into the open. *snort*

So you're totally buying the pit ticket, right?

♥

[citibyrd]

Yeah, I bought a pit ticket. I am stupidly excited, but also I think that's the most money I've ever spent on a single concert ticket. Ahahaha, how did that even happen? Whatever, this way I get to see them up close and can stand on Tom's side. ;)

[kueble]

:D I was WAY in the back. Section 300 out of 500 is kind of shitty. But it was still fantastic!

The most I spent was $106.50 on my FOB secret show ticket. Worth every penny.

[xcacophony]

You made me cry. Yes. cry. That is so overdramatic but I don't bloody care. I'm tearing up. Why?

I have been waiting bloody forever for a Blink fic with a) a good length, b) some sort of decently lengthed sex scene [where Pete Wentz isn't a third partner] and c) a real sense of sincerity and simplicity. A Mark that is just Mark and not sort of overthought and a Tom that.. god, I can't explain it, I just love your Tom. And the inclusion of Bronx and a likable Ashley and they both dealing with missing their kids. And, you know, it's realistic in a lot of ways and..

I just love it. I tend to ramble when I get this way. Please, please, keep writing Blink.

[kueble]

THANK YOU!

Your comment makes me ridiculously happy. I had no idea if I had a handle on the boys and having you think it was realistic is just awesome. I have to admit that the inclusion of Ashlee and Bronx was kind of self-indulgent once I realized I wanted Tom to miss his kids. I'm glad it came across ok!

It's crazy how much I want to write about these boys. I just need to think of some new ideas/motivation. I'm hoping it'll happen.

[revengetherapy]

wow. just, uh, wow. if this was your first, jesus christ, do not let this also be your last!

[kueble]

Thanks! I really hope it's not my last. heh. These two are kind of fantastic. I'm sad I didn't see it long before I saw them live last weekend.

[sapporonoodles]

I've been waiting for a blink fic like this ever since i stumbled into this fandom :) SO GOOD. there are sentences and words that just made me melt. you are terrific, this is terrific, if you don't write again soon i don't know if i'll be able to swallow my sadness this is INCREDIBLE. and every single part, it was just so them.

[kueble]

Oh wow. THANK YOU. I'm pretty sure once I think of something that's (probably) not related to this tour, I'll be able to write it. Though, this is kind of begging for a short hotel night sex scene, so I don't know. heh.

[sapporonoodles]

there's no such thing as too much hotel sex.

[ohnoscarlett]

My red pen and I are waiting. ;)