Envy Prompt

May 04, 2009 09:16

nekid_spike   has prompts for the Seven Deadly Sins.  This week is Envy. 
     Here are three drabbles I wrote for the prompt. Tell me if you think I captured envy here.

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woman_of_ May 4 2009, 14:38:54 UTC
Oh very good, they always underestimated Spike!

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kudagirl May 4 2009, 15:06:44 UTC
I never miss a chance to point out how Spike was worthy. Thanks.

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dawnofme May 4 2009, 14:55:09 UTC
Very good! The last bit with the first was chilling interesting. I think you dealt with envy very well. :)

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kudagirl May 4 2009, 15:08:56 UTC
Thanks. I always felt that the First was a bit worried there at the end when it spoke to Buffy in the basement. It used Caleb's form to mock her and Spike. Why would it bother if it was so sure of winning?

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larabeckinsale May 4 2009, 14:56:29 UTC
That was really good!

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kudagirl May 4 2009, 15:09:50 UTC
Thanks. Some prompts just write themselves. This one did for me.

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mabel_marsters May 4 2009, 16:51:54 UTC
Great series of drabbles - loved them.

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kudagirl May 4 2009, 17:18:46 UTC
Thanks. These are three that I'm really proud of how they came out. See I can take a compliment when I like the drabble.

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lifefailsme May 4 2009, 17:06:58 UTC
They never realised Spike's potential! I love how chillingly this ended!!

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kudagirl May 4 2009, 17:19:49 UTC
Yes, they all dismissed Spike as not important. Fooled them, didn't he? Thanks.

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