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kt_investigator

Too Alike Each Other

Sep 17, 2011 08:04

Raoul folded shoved his hands in his pockets and stepped away from the grave. It was taller than he was, but it was a complete lie.

He spat at the ground and shivered in the cold of the night as a wind swept through Stormwind's graveyard. Or maybe he was shivering with rage. He didn't know. It wasn't something he was going to spend too much time ( Read more... )

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festeros September 17 2011, 21:28:28 UTC

Awesome! I'm going to have trouble fitting what I liked about this into a concise comment. I was kept interested hoping that something would turn around for Raoul, but still not disappointed (though sympathetic) with how it concluded. Is it just me, or did YOU intentionally write it so it could stand as a short story on its own, even if this is the first time anyone is looking at any of your writing? And it makes me feel inspired to write something IC in a similar format, with action and conflict going on.

kt_investigator September 17 2011, 21:30:04 UTC

I wrote this so it could stand as its own. :) Most of Raoul's entries are IC journals, but he is not going to write about this event.

So I felt it would be a shame to have it be forgotten just because he's not going to open his mouth about it.

I'm very glad you like it, and even more glad that it inspires you!