TM Topic 181 - Describe your perfect day

Jun 07, 2007 20:44

He read the prompt and smiled broadly. That would be soon, sooner than it had ever been he thought, while setting up the test tubes with the other immortal's blood. He'd collected enough now to move into the next stage of his work. The first stage of altering their blood was at a critical point, evident by the test subjects residing directly ( Read more... )

world domination, collective, theatrical muse, clyde

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andre_korda June 9 2007, 01:58:55 UTC
ooc: This is so very dark but the thing that really makes it brilliant is this theme of tenderness and love on the one hand and brutality on the other hand. You can see two completely different sides of Kronos through the eyes of another. This other being so innocent of human understanding it drives home the basic instincts of survival.

Very nicely done! *claps*

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kronos_endtime June 27 2007, 15:53:20 UTC
I am very grateful for the kind thoughts. *g*

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pleasuresremain June 9 2007, 14:32:14 UTC
He nodded as he made his observation, "When Kronos is happy, everybody's happy! And that -- is a good thing."

OOC: I just want to state for the record that you've done a wonderful job with everything up to this point showing us how dedicated Kronos is to science and in effecting change. Now whether that means it will be better for him (and possibly other immortals) or mankind as a whole, we'll just have to keep reading to find out.

Brava and well done!

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kronos_endtime June 27 2007, 15:55:15 UTC
*smiles at his brother's correct perspective*

ooc: I'm very grateful for the your kind thoughts and feedback. :)

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