Chapter One of the previously titled "Of Harry and Teddy"

[krmim27]

Okay, here it is. Chapter One of the previously titled "Of Harry and Teddy".  The title may be changed as the story is taking a turn away from the two. THE PLOT BUNNIES HAVE RUN AWAY WITH MY MIND!!! If you would like to leave a comment, feel free but only constructive critisms are allowed...Cruelty sucks and so do mean people!

“OF HARRY AND TEDDY”

Comments

Chapter 1

[clara86]

You know what, I really like this first chapter!!
There are some editing things, like perhaps putting thoughts in italics, just for ease of reading, but apart from that I thought it was very good.
Ginny's character especially shines through, and I am looking forward to reading more!!
Well done hun!!
Clara

Re: Chapter 1

[krmim27]

Thanks! I think that when I saved it as a HTML format it lost the italics. I will be more careful when I post chapter 2 so the formatting works.

Thanks for the comments...Now I may actually finish chapter two and post it sometime next week.