Excellent job! The imagery is wonderful and the photos really help solidify the setting. I love how John does what is right regardless of the consequences he might face. How frustrating it must be to know what should be (personnel and engine performance and more) and to have to fight so hard to move an inch toward it.
Thank you hon. As you know this was a giant bear of a story to write and we've second and tripled guessed are selves on many things, now it's just tweaks and posts.
I'm halfway through this and I gotta leave in 6 mins. I just wanted to say I'm LOVING this. The detail is awesome and the interactions and their AU roles and positions are great!
You'll get more once I actually finish the story... :)
Hehe, you don't want to know how large our research file was on this, several megabytes :-P But it was part of the fun and obstacle of writing this monster.
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Glad you enjoyed the banter, there is a ton more of that to come!
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I'm halfway through this and I gotta leave in 6 mins. I just wanted to say I'm LOVING this. The detail is awesome and the interactions and their AU roles and positions are great!
You'll get more once I actually finish the story... :)
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Hope you enjoy the rest.
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