Well, this can't be good (Keith, Veronica, Logan) 2/?

[kristen0912]

Title: Well, this can't be good (WIP) 2/? 
Author: Kristen
Pairing/Character: Keith, Veronica, Logan (mentions of ensemble)
Word Count: 2362
Rating: G
Summary: It's called 'stealth', dad. One of the things I picked up from the FBI.  
Spoilers: Futurefic, know the whole series
Warnings: None
Disclaimer: I am in no way associated with the owners,

Comments

[danceprincess20]

Very interesting, I really like this. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job!

[vanessagalore]

This part is as good as the first. I like the way you've set up the mystery; it has a lot of potential to be interesting in and of itself and as a way for the characters to interact. And of course, it's always nice to see Backup included in a fic.

[fickledame]

Ooh, I love this! Love the set up, and poor Veronica. :( I hope to see more Logan and Veronica interaction and I look forward to more.

[motylik]

This is great! I especially love that it's from Keith's POV and you see how worried he is about Veronica. I can't wait for more and to find out what the mysery is about!

[havemy_heart]

I'm anxiously awaiting the part where we find out Candice is no good and Logan goes back to Veronica ;)

I loved the Keith/Veronica interaction in this. They have an awesome relationship, which you've really captured.

I'm wondering if Logan really does believe that something nefarious happened to Candice, or if he's just upset that yet another person in his life has abandoned him and he's trying to justify it. I feel so bad for both him and Veronica. Sure, their relationship is difficult, but they hurt so much when they're apart, and I believe that they only feel better with each other.

I'm glad you addressed where Keith will be getting money, because they definitely can't afford for him not to be working.