Persimmons

Mar 25, 2013 01:10

Persimmons
kris/chanyeol, pg-13, au, 7,000+ words
"some people say home is where you come from. but i think it's a place you need to find, like it's scattered and you pick pieces of it up along the way."
(a/n: hover over chinese for translation, if that doesn't work click here. anon commenting turned on)

dedicated to park chanyeol )

p: kris/chanyeol, !oneshot

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krisoul March 25 2013, 05:11:45 UTC
spot for kim_ri

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kim_ri March 26 2013, 21:32:03 UTC
SCREAMING 哥哥写得太棒了!!!

waaaaaahasdfjkljfd i love the mellow, lazy sort of pace/tone this fic had ;____; it's so nice from all the angst i'm reading weeps.

idk why but i felt like i was reading you childhood via kris's life IDK LMFAO but so much nostalgia omg ;;;;

"Some might say that you're my lover, and some might say that you're my boyfriend," Yifan whispers into Chanyeol's ear, "but I say, you're mine."
gone bye doNE WITH LIFE LUXIIIIII

Chanyeol finishes Yifan's new book and jumps on Yifan when he returns home, impatiently wrapping his legs around Yifan's waist.
this image was rly cute in my head but then i reread and the word impatient gave it a whole new meaning and i asepoigjasdf

ugh i've been waiting for so long for a good krisyeol fic so thank youuuuuu this is perfect HOW DO YOU PERFECT LUXI TEACH ME PLEASE ;___; ♥

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downpour March 25 2013, 05:19:38 UTC
There are wants and needs and even desperation between the two as Yifan pulls on Chanyeol's hair and Chanyeol slides his tongue into Yifan's mouth. Yifan presses Chanyeol back onto the bed and starts licking the underside of his jaw. Hands travel under Chanyeol's shirt and roam his skin, stopping to thumb his protruding hip bones.

#GOODBYE.

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_ochre March 25 2013, 06:30:29 UTC
jesus neha clam down

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downpour March 25 2013, 20:27:58 UTC
dO nOt TeLL me TO BE cALm.

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_ochre March 25 2013, 07:27:41 UTC
i made a lot of sighing noises as i went through this

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hipployta March 25 2013, 07:27:52 UTC
Chanyeol finishes Yifan's new book and jumps on Yifan when he returns home, impatiently wrapping his legs around Yifan's waist

I guess whatever he was secretly writing about Chanyeol REALLY made his position clear LOL. Nice...

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anonymous March 25 2013, 16:26:42 UTC
'It's silly for them to worry because they stand a head taller than most of the people, but when you care for someone, you do silly things. You find yourself searching for that someone in a sea of people, only to realize that you've always been looking at them.' This is so beautiful and it sounds vaguely familiar. Did you post the teaser for this somewhere before <3

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krisoul March 25 2013, 17:10:23 UTC
yes i did! i made an edit for it here :D

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