Supernatural fic: First Kill (Dean, gen)

[krisomniac]

Title: First Kill
Author: krisomniac
Disclaimer: No intended infringement, no profits, etc. Supernatural, all characters and subsidiaries are owned by the execs down at Warner. I'm just here to have fun.
Ship(s): None
Wordcount: 3600
Summary: She eyed him suspiciously. "You're awfully young to be doing this kind of work

Comments

[krisomniac]

Thank you! :)

[janissa11]

Riveting, and absolutely convincing from start to finish. Excellent!

[krisomniac]

Grazi grazi. I'm kind of completely new to the fandom. :)

[chrismouse]

Wow. I like the way you have the past and present sort of parallel each other then meet in the middle. And I LOVED the "Before you can kill a thing, you've got to know where it keeps its heart." So, so true. And the testing of Dean, in just the right way. And the "you can get my back anytime". Hooyah. Loverly.

[krisomniac]

Hehe. I figure John would want them to learn, but keep them safe as the same time. (not an easy thing to manage, really)

[deirdre_c]

Hi! Recced here by ignipes. Great story! I really liked it. It's got such a nice flow to it. I especially like the two interludes: the birthday gun and Dean remembering his missed shot at the Shtriga.

Man, I love John, but he can be a real bastard at times:
"Instinct," he said. "And you'll want to do a better job of hiding that."

Thanks for sharing this!

[krisomniac]

I'm glad you liked. The birthday gun was 100% inspired by ignipes as a matter of fact. Her canon, really. :)

Hehehe. I guess he's (John's) just doing his best in a screwed up puppy sort of way.

[mellaithwen]

very cool stuff, and interesting little exercise that John tried out :D kept thinking about Jack Sparrow in PotC when he's spinning the coin between his fingers, great image :D and nicely tied in with the homeless man at the beginning and then Mrs Holden and general awesomeness :D

[krisomniac]

Hehehe. Same demon, many faces.

Thank you!!