Supernatural drabble: Rope. Chalk. Lighter. Beads (G, gen, 100 words)

Jun 03, 2007 18:49

Just to get the mojo flowing.

Title: Rope. Chalk. Lighter. Beads.

Wasn't supposed to end like this-- )

gen, fic, supernatural

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iamstealthyone June 3 2007, 23:04:49 UTC
Ooh, nice. I really like how you used so few words to create tension and the overall mood, and I loved Sam's little smile at the end. Go, Sam, go!

I especially enjoyed this bit:

A blaze of glory, guns and guts and the rest of the world be damned. Talons and teeth, angry sprits and things that crawl out of the dark. Holding the retreat for frightened children, the wrong fight, in the wrong bar, on the wrong stormy night.

Great imagery there.

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krisomniac June 5 2007, 11:15:13 UTC
:) thanky! Sam's so gonna kick serious ass. ♥

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deirdre_c June 3 2007, 23:06:04 UTC
Dean, too calm. Sam FTW!!

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krisomniac June 5 2007, 11:15:54 UTC
eeE!!! Dee!!! I can't even WAIT for next season, OMG.

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lyra_wing June 3 2007, 23:20:19 UTC
Awww, Sammy!

I love this. How can you people drabble so well? Tell a complete story in 100 words? I am jealous.

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krisomniac June 5 2007, 11:16:53 UTC
ZOMg, I am so not talented at this, but it's hella fun to mess around. :D

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ignipes June 4 2007, 00:06:26 UTC
Oooh, that's shivery and wonderful.

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krisomniac June 5 2007, 11:17:12 UTC
eee! Thanky! :D

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rosekay June 4 2007, 00:16:35 UTC
What a moment. I love this, the shifting sense of creepiness, and Sam, so purposed. Hot. :)

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krisomniac June 5 2007, 11:18:00 UTC
OMG, the next season finale is going to WIN. and thanky!

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