Green-Eyed

[krisherdown]

I'm trying to get the hang of this LiveJournal thing. That and writing my first OC fic are a painful combination.

Title: Green-Eyed
Author: Kris S.
Rating: PG
Fandom: The OC
Pairing: Seth/Ryan
Author Note: This begins at or right after the last scene in "The Proposal", when the gang got together in Marissa's newly decorated room.

So he’s back with

Comments

[pressdbtwnpages]

Nice job. Not bad for a first time. Um, have you considered finding yourself a beta reader though?

[krisherdown]

I'm guessing that means the beta I have is out of a job. :) Actually, two minor things I did correct but that was my fault in not transferring the notes, not his.

Are you offering?

[pressdbtwnpages]

Sure. I can beta for you if you'd like.