Just something I wrote... it's not long. =)

[kris926]

I wrote this a while back... I'd love your thoughts. It's one of the greatest things you can do for me, to review my writing. Just let me know you read it/liked it/hated it/whatever. It would mean a lot to me. =)

She fixed me with one of her looks, the one that told me I wasn't going to like what was coming. Her lips twisted to the side, and an

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[emi101]

Literally, I have been sitting here at my desk for the past 10 minutes trying to muster something up in reply to that story, but I can't think of anything to describe how perfect that was. At first I thought I wasn't going to be able to follow it, but the ending proved that wrong. You wrapped it up in a very clear, simple, yet STRONG way. Being content almost seems impossible to me, =/, but I completely understood what you were trying to say through these people.
I WANT TO SEE MORE OF YOUR WRITING!!! =]]

[emi101]

And SORRY I'm replying so late. =[

[kris926]

=) Thanks so much. I'm not really sure what to say in response to that (maybe I should turn of the tv, that'd probably help), but you've definitely made my night.

This is kind of weird because I'm usually like FLKDJSLFKDJ but idk. I'm in a mood. But seriously, thanks.

Don't worry, you will. =) There's a little... idk like two sentence thing that I'll probably post sometime tonight. Maybe.

[emi101]

Lol, you don't have to turn off the tv. ;) Glad to have made your night, but it really was the truth! :) You made mine with that story!