White Collar - Coming Home

Mar 22, 2012 19:57

Title: Coming Home
Rating: PG
Characters: Peter, Neal, El, Hughes, June, Diana, Jones
Warnings: Spoilers for Judgment Day
Summary: Peter has someone important he needs to pick up. Written for this Prompt at collarcorner. Big thanks to aelfgyfu_mead for giving me the much needed inspiration to make this story possible.

Coming Home )

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Squeee! ebeneezerdark March 23 2012, 03:45:00 UTC
What a great idea for getting Neal out from under Kramer's charges and back to NYC (and Peter & El)...

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Re: Squeee! kriadydragon March 24 2012, 01:13:00 UTC
Thank you :D aelfgyfu_mead was the one who thought up the immunity part in a conversation elsewhere. Up until then I couldn't figure out squat that would make this story possible.

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Re: Squeee! ebeneezerdark March 24 2012, 17:09:23 UTC
It's a great idea... :-)

...and I'd LOVE to see Kramer's reaction when he hears that Neal's back and Kramer CAN'T HAVE HIM.

::makes bratty-kid Nyaaahh-Nyaaahh-Nyaaahh faces at mean, C.I.-harassing Kramer::

I'm currently working on an AU where Neal (mostly due to fears he'd get Peter into Big Trouble, plus all the reasons he's already given for wanting to stay in NYC) doesn't run, and spends some time as Kramer's C.I. (title: "Indentured Servitude"). My biggest problem is trying to get Neal back in NYC with Peter... :-(

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sholio March 23 2012, 03:55:31 UTC
AWWWWWWWWWWWW. This is a really awesome Neal-coming-home story; I love this idea for Neal's homecoming and exoneration, and Neal feeling safe and comfortable enough to fall asleep on Peter is simply adorable.

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kriadydragon March 24 2012, 01:14:22 UTC
Thank you :D I'm not really into what-if tags but this one wouldn't leave me alone with all its adorableness potential (and an excuse to work in Neal and Peter hugging. And cake ;))

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pooh_collector March 23 2012, 04:31:42 UTC
Sweet. Somehow I don't see Neal's return to New York being this lacking in chase scenes and crazy stunts. But, I really liked the idea of Neal winning his way back through some heroic but plan of his own.

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kriadydragon March 24 2012, 01:16:30 UTC
Thank you :D Neal's return is definitely going to be something exciting and adventurous, and I was tempted to write something like that, but the mood for fluff and cuteness wouldn't let me ;)

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sahiya March 23 2012, 04:51:08 UTC
Awww, I liked this a lot.

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kriadydragon March 24 2012, 01:16:57 UTC
Thank you :D

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love_82 March 23 2012, 04:53:12 UTC
Awww, I love this! A great way for Neal to come home. I loved his and Peter's reunion and Neal falling asleep on Peter is so adorable.

Thanks for the wonderful fluffiness.

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kriadydragon March 24 2012, 01:17:35 UTC
Glad you enjoyed :D

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