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kriadydragon

White Collar - Stop me if you Heard This One

Jan 28, 2012 13:27

Title: Stop me if you Heard This One
Rating: PG for language
Characters: Neal, Peter, Mozzie
Warnings: None
Summary: Neal tries very, very hard not to get drunk - or drugged, or both - for good reason. Not beta'd but edited.

A/N: This is one of those poor stories that have been sitting on my harddrive forever. I thought it was high time to post.

( Stop me if you Heard this One )

white collar, fanfiction

Comments 35

leoraine January 28 2012, 20:50:27 UTC

Hahaha, love poor Neal! That last line? BEST EVER! Thanks for the lighthearted fic:-)

kriadydragon January 30 2012, 20:59:15 UTC

Glad you enjoyed :D

black_raven135 January 28 2012, 20:58:21 UTC

Okay I am now trying to figure out how to find the pilot so I can figure out what is going on but with SOPA/PIPA it is getting harder and harder to locate a pilot online
If I recollect Neal is the 'artist' not the FBI agent???
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sholio January 28 2012, 21:26:56 UTC

You can get the show on DVD from Netflix if you have it! iTunes and Amazon also have individual episodes for sale (although you need the software to play them).

kriadydragon January 30 2012, 21:00:02 UTC

Neal, the young guy, is the con artist and Peter is the FBI agent.

sholio January 28 2012, 21:13:33 UTC

*grins* This is a lot of fun! Poor Neal! But I really love the way that you have the story unfold through clues and bits of narration - very nicely done. I also like the nifty little character details, like Byron having "special" jackets with extra hidden pockets, or Neal not liking to be drunk (which fits very well with the way he is on the show - it's something I had noticed about him, actually, that even if other people around him are drinking heavily, he doesn't).

kriadydragon January 30 2012, 21:03:36 UTC

Thank you :D It makes total sense to me that Neal would be careful about how much he drank and how buzzed he got. That kind of thing could be dangerous for him and, yeah, you never really see him get hammered in the show.

yamx January 28 2012, 21:23:35 UTC

*giggle* Poor Neal!

Well done!

kriadydragon January 30 2012, 21:03:55 UTC

Thanks! :D

neontiger55 January 28 2012, 21:30:15 UTC

Lol. I really liked this, especially the retelling of the undercover op via Peter.

'He tossed the tile next to the pendant irritably. “Was I drugged again?”' So very Neal ;)

kriadydragon January 30 2012, 21:04:42 UTC

Thank you :D I love exploring all the cooky adventures Neal could've gotten into, both before the anklet and after.