SGA Fic - Roughing It

Mar 22, 2009 05:48

Title: Brainstorm Tag: Roughing It
Rating: PG for swears and sickness
Characters: John, Ronon
Disclaimer: I don't own Stargate Atlantis.
Summary: John, Ronon, Camping - need I say more? Beta'd by the lovely sharpes_hussey. A bonus tag written for wildcat88.

Brainstorm Tag: Roughing it )

stargate atlantis, fanfiction

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tridget March 24 2009, 15:52:43 UTC
This Brainstorm tag was by far the best part of the episode! I had really wanted to hear about that camping trip. Beautiful friendship story.

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kriadydragon March 24 2009, 19:57:02 UTC
Thank you:) I was actually quite surprised by the lack of Brainstorm camping tags for this ep. I thought for sure there would be a ton. A lot of people were requesting them, but no one was really writing them except for really short stuff that was either slash or verging on slash.

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magaday March 24 2009, 17:43:51 UTC
Nice story. Fic with Shep Ronon friendship and this was well done. Nice bit of whump as well. Could totally picture JS surfing by your descriptions.

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kriadydragon March 24 2009, 19:57:39 UTC
Thanks :D

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coolbreeze1 March 24 2009, 18:31:41 UTC
Great tag! You've really captured John and Ronon's friendship. I love the little insights into their characters. For John - who has trouble opening up in the show - and Ronon - who doesn't say much at all in the show - the ease with which these two talked to each other and opened up really felt real and exactly how I imagine them talking to each other.

I loved the descriptions of the ocean and surfing...made me wish I lived closer to the ocean. My favorite line:

Ronon hated surfing.

I burst out laughing at that part. So true! Surfing is much, much harder than it looks...

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kriadydragon March 24 2009, 19:59:53 UTC
Thanks! I feel that, IMHO, of all the team, Ronon would be the one that John opens up to the easiest, because he knows that Ronon is someone who will listen and not act on what he hears, or be made to feel uncomfortable by it.

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x_erikah_x March 24 2009, 21:31:13 UTC
That was wonderful! Wish we had gotten this episode instead.

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kriadydragon March 24 2009, 23:55:29 UTC
Thanks! Yeah, it would have been interesting :D.

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shepsgirl March 24 2009, 21:41:42 UTC
Wonderful tag, loved every moment of it. I adore the interaction between John and Ronon. They know each other so well and don't need many words to express how they feel, but yet John opens up so effortlessly around Ronon. Nice little bit of whump as well, poor John. Look forward to more John and Ronon stories from you. Thanks

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kriadydragon March 25 2009, 00:00:18 UTC
Thank you:) As I said in one of the responses above, I feel that Ronon is the easiest person John would open up to.

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