SGA Fic - Blue Danube

[kriadydragon]

Title: Blue Danube
Rating: PG
Characters: Sheppard, some McKay
Summary: "John was four, maybe five, when he first remembered going to the ocean." Written for artword, color challenge. Big thanks to karri_kln1671 for the beta.

Art: Blue by kilograph.

Comments

[sakurablue13]

a spontaneous John is always enjoyable
part of his charm, i guess

[kriadydragon]

Most likely :D

[antares04a]

John building, David being a pain in the ass and destroying it. - Brothers!! *g*
It's very nice how the present and the past are interwoven in this story. And I like John's spontaneity!

[kriadydragon]

Thank you :D

[esteefee]

Oh, I loved the vivid descriptions in this, and the slow reveal of why John is so pissed at having to wait, at being trapped.

She was out there, alone, waiting for them. Waiting to be found, rescued. Waiting to remember what it was like to be safe.

::heart crunch::

It had made the sea and the sky one. It had made swimming like flying.

Just *wonderful*.

He wondered if his mom would be proud.

This return made me wibble.

[kriadydragon]

Thanks! I love writing John and the water. I feel it his second element after sky ;)

[space1traveler]

Nice, ultra nice!

[kriadydragon]

Thanks! :)