Comments | krellinad: Royal Love, pt. 2 (Harry/Louis)

krellinad

Royal Love, pt. 2 (Harry/Louis)

Dec 14, 2012 15:55

Title: Royal Love, pt. 2
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Harry/Louis
Word Count: ~9,500
Summary: 1dkinkmeme: Sequel; Harry is a prince, Louis is in a boy band.
Disclaimer: Fiction, not getting paid, don't know or own the people.

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fandom: one direction

Comments 6

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krellinad December 19 2012, 22:20:54 UTC

I frequently worry about pace (I sometimes get wrapped up in a storyline and sort of lose myself from the overall story), so I'm glad you thought it was good! Yay for backbone!Louis ;]

bbeyourself December 19 2012, 05:10:48 UTC

omfg this is perfect. they're just so cute together <3.
Loved every single word.

krellinad December 19 2012, 22:21:51 UTC

They are, aren't they? XD thank you, darlin'!

just_larrys December 20 2012, 07:56:09 UTC

This fic was pure shiny gold. As said in the other comments, your pace is wonderfully planned out, not too fast or agonizingly slow. Just right. And I love how you portrayed Harry into this very closed and shy prince in the beginning but then quickly twisted it around to create this stunning Harry that seemed like he wasn't afraid to take on the world for Louis and he was brave and ugh. The image of an actual prince. Loved it.

And don't get me started on Louis because he was absolutely flawless and his heart is filled with such sweetness like pink fluffy cotton candy.

All in all, your writing is indeed beautiful, love. :3

krellinad December 20 2012, 10:03:12 UTC

Ahhh you make bloosh :]

Yeah, I wanted Harry to shift out of the "newly in love" phase and into the "back to reality, you're a prince" phase this time around. And of course Louis is gonna have a strong, sweet heart. Because he's our Louis and he lerves a priiiinncee :D

Thank you for commenting!

nanakirae May 5 2013, 14:50:27 UTC

I think I'm in love with your writing. <3
This is perfect. So much passion and just <3 <3 <3 cannot give you enough hearts.
Niall is the cutest in this fic. I wonder what nonsense he talks about when he drunk dials Harry xD
And I just love how Larry's relationship went. Althouhh Anne is pretty cold, a mother doesn't have the heart to just ignore his son's happiness :')

It's already late so I'm stopping short before more nonsense comes out from me. You're in list of my favorite writers. This was amazing <3