Commentary for Need

[krazykitkat]

As requested by mandysbitchI've been reading other people's commentaries, and this is kindergarten in comparison. I can't analyse anything to save my life, I'll never be accused of being deep and meaningful, and I wouldn't know a literary device or convention if I tripped over one. Most of the time I'm not really thinking about why I'm writing what I'm

Comments

[lifeasanamazon]

Oh, thank you! Thank you! I just love this so much and your commentary is the icing on the cake.

Just so fantastic.

[krazykitkat]

I'm relieved it isn't as bad as I thought. Because what I said at the start is the truth. Most of the time I'm just writing. I might turn around at the end and find a theme or something staring back at me. But it usually isn't planned. And so I can't talk about what's not there.

Thank you.

[littlemissscifi]

Your commentry is awesome. Thankyou for doing that. :)

[krazykitkat]

Thank you for reading it. And I'm glad you found it of interest.

[littleloonlost]

Oh, this is lovely. Both story and commentary. It's always so nice to hear a little more about where they come from.

[krazykitkat]

Thank you. I was really worried it was boring. I'm terrible at analysis.

And pretty icon!

[tangleofthorns]

I agree that both are just lovely. Your use of physical detail in this story is just astoundingly brilliant.

[krazykitkat]

Thank you.

Physical detail is my big weakness, so I try to put in just little things rather than describing everything.

[sweetly_savage]

It's hard for me to decide which is better in this meme: getting to read the author's comments or getting to read the story again.

This was wonderful. Thank you!

[krazykitkat]

Thank you for commenting :)