Comments | kratynoi: [Fic] as luck would have it 5/? (wip)

kratynoi

[Fic] as luck would have it 5/? (wip)

Jul 10, 2012 18:21

Title: as luck would have it 5/?
Pairing: Jaejoong/Changmin AU; JaeMin (other pairings: YunYoon, YooSu)
Length: Chaptered/ WIP
Rating: PG-13ish? I don't know how to rate. We'll say there's a little bit of language and suggestive content (but seriously, very very innocent)
A/N: Here's your freakin' update Tani!!! I'm running out of creative LJ-cuts. JJ ( Read more... )

jaemin, writing, dbsk, fiction, as luck would have it

Comments 14

waterpulse July 11 2012, 01:41:56 UTC

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kratynoi July 11 2012, 07:29:56 UTC

This good enough to make up for the angst? :3

Lol. I think I had a little too much fun writing this chapter. XDDD

*glomps* I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT WAIFU~~~

waterpulse July 11 2012, 15:02:54 UTC

YES IT WAS BLESS YOUR HEART ♥♥♥

whatifgirl86 July 11 2012, 06:27:53 UTC

Yunho and Yoona are too cute together. Liked the Jaemin interaction, definitely seeing some bonding happening^_^

Just imagining how red Jaejoong gets makes me smile, he's too cute being all embarrassed in front of Changmin.

kratynoi July 11 2012, 07:34:11 UTC

*\o/* Yay~~~ XD I'm glad you think so!

JaeMin's is a slow and strange bonding. ^^; Honestly, I'm surprised this fic's lasted this long, I'd hoped it would have been wrapped up by now but JaeMin aren't cooperating and are taking their time and being both stubborn and stupid.

Lol, I think I write Jaejoong a little too lovesick and klutzy in his feelings. But as long as it doesn't seem too unbelievable from how he'd really act...then I'm happy. (Changmin's cool as a cucumber...sadly, we don't get to see his perspective 'cause he's probably equally as clumsy)

jaeminism July 11 2012, 07:34:20 UTC

passing out on ur fic... gonna comment properly tom... Its your punishment for not updating LAST NIGHT... Booo

kratynoi July 11 2012, 07:35:53 UTC

Ouch~ not that interesting? Hurt hurt~
XP
If I updated LAST NIGHT you wouldn't have gotten Yunho acting stupid.

jaeminism July 11 2012, 07:41:07 UTC

NOOOO... I LOVED MY FLUFFY AND AWKWARD JAEMIN... But I want u to suffer a lil bit... and its not like my comment is imp anyway...:P

kratynoi July 11 2012, 07:44:00 UTC

Fine fine~ off with you *shoo shoo*
Goodnight!

jaeminism July 13 2012, 04:45:44 UTC

OK FINALLY I AM HERE TO COMMENT PROPERLY...
I should not though... You are having fun with your frnds instead of working on the update... not fair...-___-

I LOVED LOVED LOVEDDD this chapter... It was dkhfkjgckblgjkfhds...

Jae is sooooo cuteee and STUPID... Lets not talk abt the shower line OMG!!!

Yunho is such a girlllll... OMG!!! Hahaha...
and about Yoona's last text.. Umm... I am guessing she is gonna send Minnie to Jae's house? Its just a guess... DNT GIVE ME SPOILERS OK?

NOW UPDATE ASAP... I want chapter 6 by Monday... M O N D A Y Unnie Monday ok?

kratynoi July 13 2012, 05:21:34 UTC

I WASN'T OUT WITH FRIENDS I WAS OUT WITH FAMILY!

*cough* Anyway...

Lol~ I'm glad you loved this chapter! This chapter was definitely a lot of fun to write. ^__^

Jaejoong is Jaejoong~~ what can I say. As is Yunho.

XP I'll update when my muse cooperates!! Right now what I have written is starting to sound "blah" and cliche...as if the whole thing isn't cliche, but stillll~~

jaeminism July 13 2012, 05:56:07 UTC

This is why I HATE you...
WHY DOES UR MUSE LEAVE U EVERY NOW N THEN? Ugghhh

kratynoi July 13 2012, 05:57:41 UTC

TAKE IT UP WITH MY MUSE! IT'S THE ONE WITH ISSUES~!!!

I want to edit too but I've been having a dry spell with that as well and it's frustrating the heck out of me~~~!!!

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