An old prompt that I decided to re-do [the fourth]

[kramskii]

Prompt:  Something Secret
Community: your_scribbles
Warnings: Death and variations of it, suicide by jumping and over-dose, terminal illness, sadness, and gang related death
Rating: NC-17
Authors Note: This is terrible. Actually terrible. It's super sad and I would normally say it matches how I feel, but it doesn't but the idea came and wouldn't go

Comments

[bella_dayenu]

How can you think that this is terrible writing, my dear?
Reading it pulls you into every sentence, every word. It feels, to me, that a soul was opened to share pain with the world and we all need alittle more of that in our lives. We all need to have a moment where we say "Life just plain sucks." and move on from it. This was cathartic and wonderful.

[kramskii]

I love getting responses from you, they always make my day. So, thank you so much. Really.

I mostly think it's terrible because there are spelling errors and grammar errors, and until you told me what you feel, I thought that no one would really understand. I guess they do though. I've had several of those moments these past couple of months.

It feels nice when someone tells you your writing is wonderful. So again, thank you.

[writing2death]

I can't read this because drugs are a squick for me and terminal illness is a trigger, but I'm sure it's not as bad as you think it is. Thanks for warning thoroughly and rating appropriately :)

And thanks for filling the prompt!