I think you wrote it in past tense though! Present tense would go more like this:
'"See guys! This is Tyler," She points to me, and I give a little wave. Three boys and two girls. Both girls have fiery red hair and matching wicked smiles on their faces.'
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I think you wrote it in past tense though! Present tense would go more like this:
'"See guys! This is Tyler," She points to me, and I give a little wave. Three boys and two girls. Both girls have fiery red hair and matching wicked smiles on their faces.'
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