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Fic: Forbidden City (2/2) - Adam/Kris/Katy

Jan 04, 2010 11:56

Title: Forbidden City
Author: choose2live
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Adam/Kris/Katy in slash, het, and poly combinations. Incidental Adam/Drake, Adam/OMC
Length: ~12,500
Disclaimer: This is a complete work of fiction. I don’t know these people, and if you do, for the love of God go away.
Summary: As Kris and Katy start their new life in LA, they immerse ( Read more... )

kris, katy allen, katy, kradamaty, kradam, adam, fic rating: nc-17, adam lambert

Comments 9

shetiger January 4 2010, 19:04:51 UTC

This is lovely, and feels very true to life. Thank you for writing them with such care. :)

choose2live January 5 2010, 04:31:38 UTC

What a wonderful compliment, thank you. :) Authenticity in characters is important to me; I learned a lot about them as I wrote the story. And I adore them; I'm so glad they feel real to you!

adammlambert3 January 4 2010, 19:18:52 UTC

This was written beautifully! I enjoyed reading it!

choose2live January 5 2010, 04:32:16 UTC

Thank you very much, I appreciate you taking the time to comment!

mabe85 January 4 2010, 20:54:20 UTC

I... Really, really like it.
I don't know, I think it's different because this, the thing between those three, is depicted as something that is not merely sexual.
I mean, I love, love, love how you write Katy and her acceptance. She's not just this slash-loving fangirl who gets turned on by watching her husband sexing another guy. But she needs Adam and this relationship to make herself whole; to get the essence of her existence.

Blah, I think I've read too much into this. Heh.
The point is, I love it. Thank you for writing this.

choose2live January 5 2010, 04:36:48 UTC

Oh, you read just the right amount into it. :) I really love what you said here, because you got it... it's a relationship that really not very much about sex at all, and more about completing each other. It's not simple, and will become more complicated.

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment!

trueroyalty January 5 2010, 08:46:48 UTC

I want to flail. I want to squee. I want to die a death of ded from unf. ...oh, wait, I did that already. hm. Now what? Oh! I know! I'll read it again! <3 FLOVEOMFG!!

choose2live January 5 2010, 19:54:51 UTC

Ohh, squeeage!! Flailing! Well that just makes me happy! So glad for the love! *bounce*

llaras January 8 2010, 16:53:43 UTC

I enjoyed this so much! All the pining! OMG BREAK MY HEART! Fabulousssss.