Comments | kradam_ai: Crossing the Line/O.T.T. Part 13/?

cunningdeb in kradam_ai

Crossing the Line/O.T.T. Part 13/?

Nov 04, 2009 00:24

Title: Crossing the Line/O.T.T. (Part 13 ( Read more... )

author: cunningdeb, rating: pg-13

Comments 18

jeweledvixen November 4 2009, 06:19:58 UTC

OMG! I have a knot in my stomach. Poor Adam!

dreamsofspike November 4 2009, 07:27:28 UTC

you just made me bawl and then made me seethe with fury in the same chapter... poor baby, how horrible for him, how can he feel safe now? D: this is heartbreaking, but beautifully written... loved it :) *hugs*

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cunningdeb November 4 2009, 16:10:14 UTC

I often wondered if any of the fanfic readers were doctors or lawyers. In real life, I would be as upset as anyone if a situation like this turned out this way - having said that, this is fiction, drama but you'll be happy to hear that justice will be served.

nzfan November 4 2009, 07:40:17 UTC

Wow! I've just had to play catch up and read this fic from the very beginning. What a fantastic story... hard to read at times but wonderfully written. I'll now wait patiently, with everyone else, for the next chapter!

prohibiton_sign November 4 2009, 08:17:08 UTC

OMG you're evil! Poor Adam! I'm litterally shaking now....

cunningdeb November 4 2009, 16:13:22 UTC

I know and feeling extremely guilty for it too LOL. I'm the type of person who literally won't hurt a fly (I'd catch it and set it free) yet here I am hurting and torturing the fantasy love of my life. My only excuse? In the end, I get to make it better for him as a way of apologizing.