All Good Things (A "Day Off Day" Series Continuation)

[trueroyalty]

Title: All Good Things
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Kradam, mentions of Kris/Katy & Adam/Drake
Word Count: 5,516
Author Says: Another un-beta'd piece. If you notice any mistakes, blame me & let me know, please! No, seriously, you'd better tell me. Also, I'm kinda mean to both our boys in this third installment of the whole "Day Off Day" series, but only in

Comments

[bamberrific]

OMG, I just read all the parts of this in one sitting and...I think I love you.

Seriously, this is so well written and just how I imagine this situation would play out, I am in awe of your talent.

Kris's inner monologue is perfect - you really seem to have his voice, both internal and external down so brilliantly. Adam's voice sounds very realistic to me too.

You even have Kris's randomness/quirkyness (if that was a word) spot-on, at least to me. I cannot wait for more, and hope desperately that there can be a happy ending for our lovely boys...with each other.

In short, BRAVO. Standing O. More! More!

[trueroyalty]

Wow- THANK YOU! I don't even know what to say. <3 &hearts *blush*

I'm definitely going for a happy ending- I can't have it any other way! I just don't have a clue as to how I'm gonna get there. Y'all are just as surprised by the happenings as I am! :D

Thank you again!!

[imnotasecret]

You're painting such a vivid, perfect picture with your words. I love this. I can really see both of them acting just the way you describe. Can't wait for more.

[trueroyalty]

Thank you very much, honey! I'm so glad it comes across as realistic.

[norosegarden]

Ok. So. Wow.

"Kris wants a new brain. This one’s defunct. And pushy. And mean."

This is pretty much my brain after reading this. The sex war going on in their heads? Damn. It's great that they want to keep promises to respective S.O.'s, but please, boys, you're killing me here.

[trueroyalty]

:D :D <3 hee! I love one-word sentences. :D Also, your icon, but that's neither here nor there. Actually, it's right up there, so I guess it's sort of... um... anyway.
They're killing me, too! I was wanting them to just have a throw-down on the couch right there, but they were all noble and loyal and crap. ugh. I'm working on it! :) Glad you're enjoying it, as much as a mean brain can allow you to.

[adamgrrrl]

{Kris emboldens himself and looks Adam in the... eyebrow. Wuss.} *snicker!*

and WOOOOOOOOOOW. i'm feeling a bit shell-shocked myowndamnself. DAYuuuum!!
{and it’s all Kris can do to keep from humming “keep a-coolin’, baby” from Whole Lotta Love, because then his mind shows him Adam performing Whole Lotta Love,}
{The idea of grabbing Adam’s obscenely perfect backside with both hands and biting, then licking and biting his way up Adam’s spine, his neck, fingers threading thick through Adam’s hair, stealing rough kisses until Adam decides it’s enough and reclaims command-- flushes over Kris.}
omg. my heart went blurp-blup-blllllup!

i am SOOOOOOOOO eager for the next chap now...

[adamgrrrl]

forgot to ask before (and i hope i don't sound hopelessly foolish/clueless here), in your a/n you wrote UST. what does this stand for?
(i finally JUST figured out that dod is NOT dept of defense... *snicker* DER!!!)

[trueroyalty]

Not foolish at all!! I'm always having to figure out these acronyms, it's insane. UST stands for Unresolved Sexual Tension. ...now my turn? What's DOD? Dead On Demand? Doom Or Dance? :)

[adamgrrrl]

uummm, well, i THOUGHT it stood for day off day, but if YOU don't know!!! xD goofball!

[mylittlehottie]

“We are still us. We’re just gonna be a little less overtly ‘us’ for a while. It’ll be nice to, um, get to--” Adam looks a bit lost, but then turns wickedly gleeful, “It’ll be a great time to un-scorn Matt.”

time to un-scorn matt, LOL!

[trueroyalty]

Yes! I couldn't leave that out; it's too much fun. :P Thanks so much for commenting!