hahaha. thank you. I was trying for something different than my usual stuff--less intense, sort of zoomed out, for lack of a better term. I hope it worked!
My only criticism is a teeny grammatical error I found: around the middle, you wrote: " I know you’re so far in the closet that your having adventures in Narnia, so I’m patient with you."
The your should be you're. But other than that, it was amazingly beautiful :D
sorry about the grammar. I haven't been able to write anything at all these past few days, so when the inspiration for this hit me, I just kind of jotted it all down as fast as I could and never looked back. fixing it right now!
It was so sweet and...just wonderful. I've kind of become a follower of anything you write, so I'm a little biased. But it really was great. Really, really.
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My only criticism is a teeny grammatical error I found: around the middle, you wrote:
" I know you’re so far in the closet that your having adventures in Narnia, so I’m patient with you."
The your should be you're. But other than that, it was amazingly beautiful :D
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sorry about the grammar. I haven't been able to write anything at all these past few days, so when the inspiration for this hit me, I just kind of jotted it all down as fast as I could and never looked back. fixing it right now!
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It was so sweet and...just wonderful. I've kind of become a follower of anything you write, so I'm a little biased. But it really was great. Really, really.
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& thanks for the regular support!
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