Absolutely excellent! Wow I am seriously loving this fic. It is definitely becoming my all time favourite! Oh and I love your new pic ont he title page. I just love your story telling and the chapters just seem to get better and more involved - or is it because I'm getting more involved with the story? I dunno but all I can say is please keep updating regularly and at the same time never end it!!!
Oh what a tangled web we weave! I am glad you think each chapter is getting more involved, because I think they are! The goal of the first four chapters was to sort of introduce you to all the characters, and the back half winds them all up. Each chapter is certainly getting longer, idk if that's better, but I am glad you think so!
Sorry, I just have to say this: I KNEW IT. =/ Shit, as soon as I realised that Kris was leaving ADAM BEHIND to go on this journey, I was like OH NO YOU DIDN'T! Arrgghh, you've been awfully kind to us with the frequent updates but OMG CAN YOU PLEASE UPDATE TOMORROW OR SOMETHING? I CAN'T HANDLE CLIFFHANGERS.
(haha)
*loves this story heaps* &hearts
P.S. I really love how you can instill a soft, heart-ache moment or two in the most unlikely scenes and/or places. It's brilliant. =]
*GRINS LIKE AN EVIL MANIAC* Yeah, Yeah. It wasn't planned, actually, but when Kris was leaving and Adam started pitching a fit, something in my mind clicked and I thought "This is all a big diversion, isn't it?" The more I thought about it, the more I liked it, and it really sprang the rest of the story into motion.
I plan on updating tomorrow. I'll probably start today (if the Husband doesn't kill me) and get her published late tomorrow. That's about as fast as I can promise!
Thanks for the compliment. That is something I really wanted to do because Kris is so adept at doing it in real life. You know.
YAY! new chapter before the end of my birthday! that's so awesome!!(creepily holds on to the idea that it is written for me) I like the cover. The rope around Adam's shoulder is kind of genius. (though somehow the background reminds me more of a farm than the old west...?)
That was some very skillful fade-to-dark action with Kradam in the tub. Suggestive yet leaving a lot of space for imagination. Mine was running rampant. And speaking of suggestive comments, I was totally giggling like a 9 year old at this part:
"Kristopher helped. He's quite inventive." Adam said, shooting a sly, appreciative glance towards Kris. "That so?" Mac said, clearly impressed. "Shucks, Doc." Kris said, stifling a laugh. "I barely did anything. You did most of the work." It was true. Kris bit his lip in recollection.
Cliffhangers are deliciously painful. Next Chapter please?
*claps* The rope over his shoulder was actually someone else holding a coil of microphone chord and when I turned it sepia and cropped it it totally worked!
IDK, I just googled "old west ranch" and that's what popped up. Best part is that it was saved as a .gif so when I inserted Kris and Adam they were automatically colored the same as the scene. Yay no color matching. Adam's compound does have a stable and a paddock, and the house probably looks like a farmhouse.
I am trying my durndest to keep this sexy but not explicit. Not that I have a problem with that, I just think it would be out of place. I tried to fade to dark and then go back and give you a few more details of the evening.
Yeah, ICU Adam and Kris, all with the double entandre. It's just like real life ;)
Next chapter soon, and HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Thanks so much for your comments!
The rating is mainly for violence and language. As far as smexyness goes, generally if there is more than kissing between men I ratchet it up to R. If I describe every action I put NC-17. Initially I had the ratings at R for violence and PG-13 for sex, the mod tagged it R, and so that's what I went with.
But there's no telling what I am going to do in future chapters. Sorry if the implying was a let down!!
Thanks for reading and commenting. Sorry to keep you up late!
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And YAY you like the pic! *does a dance*
Thanks so much!
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Thanks for reading and commenting!
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=/ Shit, as soon as I realised that Kris was leaving ADAM BEHIND to go on this journey, I was like OH NO YOU DIDN'T!
Arrgghh, you've been awfully kind to us with the frequent updates but OMG CAN YOU PLEASE UPDATE TOMORROW OR SOMETHING? I CAN'T HANDLE CLIFFHANGERS.
(haha)
*loves this story heaps* &hearts
P.S. I really love how you can instill a soft, heart-ache moment or two in the most unlikely scenes and/or places. It's brilliant. =]
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I plan on updating tomorrow. I'll probably start today (if the Husband doesn't kill me) and get her published late tomorrow. That's about as fast as I can promise!
Thanks for the compliment. That is something I really wanted to do because Kris is so adept at doing it in real life. You know.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
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I like the cover. The rope around Adam's shoulder is kind of genius. (though somehow the background reminds me more of a farm than the old west...?)
That was some very skillful fade-to-dark action with Kradam in the tub. Suggestive yet leaving a lot of space for imagination. Mine was running rampant. And speaking of suggestive comments, I was totally giggling like a 9 year old at this part:
"Kristopher helped. He's quite inventive." Adam said, shooting a sly, appreciative glance towards Kris.
"That so?" Mac said, clearly impressed.
"Shucks, Doc." Kris said, stifling a laugh. "I barely did anything. You did most of the work." It was true. Kris bit his lip in recollection.
Cliffhangers are deliciously painful. Next Chapter please?
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IDK, I just googled "old west ranch" and that's what popped up. Best part is that it was saved as a .gif so when I inserted Kris and Adam they were automatically colored the same as the scene. Yay no color matching. Adam's compound does have a stable and a paddock, and the house probably looks like a farmhouse.
I am trying my durndest to keep this sexy but not explicit. Not that I have a problem with that, I just think it would be out of place. I tried to fade to dark and then go back and give you a few more details of the evening.
Yeah, ICU Adam and Kris, all with the double entandre. It's just like real life ;)
Next chapter soon, and HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Thanks so much for your comments!
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But there's no telling what I am going to do in future chapters. Sorry if the implying was a let down!!
Thanks for reading and commenting. Sorry to keep you up late!
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