Fic: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing (1/2)

Aug 08, 2009 23:02

Title: All I Can Do Is Keep Breathing (1/2)
Author: alyssand
Rating: Pg-13 for once
Pairing: Friendship only - Kradison.
Beta: none because i couldn't make anyone read this.
Word count: 2,240 ish
Disclaimer: No one except the events that follow belong to me. And even those events I regret to say belong to me. Well not TO me, but yeah you may get what I’m trying ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, author: neednotwant

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claire_kay August 9 2009, 16:58:29 UTC
You know what I think of this story my dear, I think its absolutely beautiful and heartbreaking and I think you are very strong for sitting down and writing this. Like I said if it helps you then that's what matters.

You really did capture something very special here, and I do think its the experience you had of the situation that comes across in the writing. I think I had tears in my eyes like four paragraphs in.

I think it goes without saying that if you need to talk about anything at all I will happily listen to you ramble and talk away if thats what you need to do. Anytime.

Anyway I am gonna go back to lusting after Gokey. Cos you know apparently thats what I do right now. lol.

*huggles* xx

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neednotwant August 10 2009, 02:55:32 UTC
Aw hun! I love you. I’m sorry I made you cry. But I’m really grateful that you read it, especially on that snail of a computer. (: I still think a lot of bits were rather rushed and choppy but I just wanted to get it out… I do believe it helped.

Yes =D I know I have you to listen to my rambles and to gibber on about nonsense to, like your strange lusting after Gokey, which I may not quite understand but I completely accept and I can’t wait to see if it translates across in your Gokey bits in your next chapter LOL.

Thanks bb, ILU xxxx

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neednotwant August 10 2009, 02:49:00 UTC
Thank you so much dear. I really hope you’re doing okay.
Knowing that even one other person had to experience something similar… Well it's hard.. I’m so sorry for your loss. I hope I get the next part done soon but it’s taking longer than I thought it would.
Thanks for reading. xxx

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neednotwant August 11 2009, 02:16:57 UTC
<33 Thank you so much bb.

It means so much to me to hear you say this. I am sorry you ever had to feel such a pain, I could never wish it on anyone.
*hugs*

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pricelessone August 12 2009, 18:03:04 UTC
I'm so sorry about your loss.

Wow, this was so well-told, because it was from your heart and your own experience. I truly hope telling it was helpful for you. I actually missed that you were writing from personal experience, so the details caught me especially by surprise until I got to the comments.

I tried writing a fic to deal with my own hard experience years ago, and never managed to finish. I still think it was helpful though. Please take care, and know that people love you and care about how you're doing.

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neednotwant August 12 2009, 18:53:11 UTC
aw wow thank you hun. so much.
i'm glad you found writing your fic helpful despite not finishing it.

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nannerz2cool August 12 2009, 21:00:48 UTC
This was so hard-hitting. I'm so sorry about the loss of your friend. I hope this was helpful for you - sometimes writing it out is - though sometimes at the time it's too hard to even reread. It was brave of you to post something so personal. Hope you're doing all right, and know that we're thinking of you during this time.

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