Fic: The Shit Gets Real

Jul 08, 2009 13:11



Fic: The Shit Gets Real

Fiction: 2500  words.
Rating: PG-13 (really! Not my usual smut!)
Pairings: Adam & Kris
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, they are real people, they own themselves. These situations are all fiction. Etc., etc.

Special note: This fic is completely different from all the others I’ve written. Angst, anger, bigotry, fear. And ( Read more... )

author: krissypoo21, rating: pg-13

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krissypoo21 July 9 2009, 04:18:31 UTC
Thanks! I appreciate your comments.

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catalm July 9 2009, 14:27:48 UTC
Oh Krissypoo why are you making me addicted to your stories? This was amazing! When you commented this was going to be PG-13 instead of your usual smut, I'm not going to lie, I was a little disappointed but then BAM! you write an absolutely beautiful story. I think this was my favorite line: "Kris spoke from his heart. “If you’re a ‘faggot,’ Adam, then it must be a beautiful word, not an awful one. I’m proud to have it said about me.”

The Queen of Smut is now the Queen of Heartfelt! Please keep them coming!

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krissypoo21 July 9 2009, 14:32:06 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it, and that the lack of sex wasn't too disappointing, lol!

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joannacullen July 9 2009, 18:35:19 UTC
I'm sorry it took me this long to get to reading this! This was awesome. It moves at a wonderful pace and the last scene is dealt with so delicately - it's perfect. In the scheme of Kradam fic, very believable.

“We have lots of days together ahead. “ Adam said. “I won’t mess up love for the sake of sex. My urges can wait.”

This is beautiful. Favorite line.

As far as a part 2 is concerned, this is almost one of those fics that I wish would not have a sequel but do at the same time. It's so beautiful and whole on its own that putting the smut in chapter too seems insensitive to the genuineness of the characters and this chapter. At the same time, of course it would be nice to have more. Either way it will be fine! Do what you'd like to do.

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krissypoo21 July 9 2009, 22:24:45 UTC
I'm so glad you liked this. As far as part 2 - if there is one, still not sure - if there's any sex, it would not be descriptive, I'm sure of that, so probably no more than an R. I prefer this story stays sweet and tender.

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joannacullen July 9 2009, 22:26:32 UTC
Well, that's wonderful to hear. I really did enjoy this. :)

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skrollann July 9 2009, 23:27:03 UTC
So cute!
I first thought I wouldn't like it 'cause I'm an NC-17 reader but I'm really glad I read it... Really Good Job!

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krissypoo21 July 9 2009, 23:33:38 UTC
Thanks so much - I'm glad you liked it. All my other stories are NC-17, but this one needed a different feel, I thought. Still like the NC-17's, though!

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riannagray July 12 2009, 01:18:10 UTC
Just melted and teared up reading this love story. Beautiful!

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krissypoo21 July 12 2009, 01:55:33 UTC
Thank you so much for leaving a comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

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