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Can't Figure It Out

Jun 02, 2009 23:36

Title: Can't Figure It Out
Author: come_on_live
Rating: PG-13, I guess? Light R?
Pairing: Kris/Adam, mention of Adam/Drake
Summary: There are a couple of things that Kris doesn't exactly understand.
Notes: I am going to be so exhausted at work tomorrow, but as I turned out my light, this plot bunny hit. This is the first fanfic I've published in ( Read more... )

author: come_on_live, rating: pg-13

Comments 22

on_the_warpath June 3 2009, 06:37:04 UTC

oh god
i adoooored the last few paragraphs
it was very un-kris-like, or maybe it's not
ill bookmark it just for that
wowness.

come_on_live June 3 2009, 11:07:57 UTC

Awww, what a compliment, thank you!

obviouslytomark June 3 2009, 07:39:54 UTC

The ending was to die for. I loved it.
This struck me for some reason, since I'd never even thought to make a connection:
"and jeans-tshirt-and-blazer combo (that sounds so familiar), and it feels like there’s a knife in his heart."

come_on_live June 3 2009, 11:08:42 UTC

EVERY TIME I see one of Adam's boyfriends, it always gets me how much they look like Kris... skinny, brown-haired, etc. At some point, someone's going to catch on! ;)

ljelliez June 3 2009, 08:35:31 UTC

this was good. ;) jealous!kris fics makes me feel happy because i like to think this is what is really happening right now.

come_on_live June 3 2009, 11:08:57 UTC

Thank you, I'd like to think so too. :)

marjorie2009 June 3 2009, 09:34:42 UTC

Kris Kris Kris!!! What does Adam thinks of Kris' action? I want to know. Hope for a sequel.

come_on_live June 3 2009, 11:09:46 UTC

Ehhh, probably no sequel. I imagine Adam being surprised at the anger/jealousy when Kris shows up at his apartment, but pleased with the outcome ;)

on_the_warpath June 3 2009, 13:01:42 UTC

oh, i just noticed. you repeated a paragraph? was that intentional? about the news thing.

and 'maul me with hugs and temple kisses' it suddenly turned to first person there. just a tip ;)

on_the_warpath June 3 2009, 13:03:02 UTC

AND

'why he looks at this other guy (this other guy? where did that come from?), with his short brown hair, and jeans-tshirt-and-blazer combo (that sounds so familiar)'

at first i read it as 'looks LIKE this other guy' but then i went back and i realized my version made sense too XD almost underlying message. ahah. esp. since what follows is a hint to drake's similarities with kris.

come_on_live June 3 2009, 13:18:01 UTC

The paragraph repeating was intentional... he's looking at the picture once, and all these emotions well up.
The first person bit was an accident, thanks, I fixed it.