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FIC: Broken Open 6A/6B

Sep 27, 2010 02:33

Broken Open
Summary: After years of violence and abuse Adam finally escapes.
Disclaimer: I know none of these people, nor do I own them, they own themselves. This story is completely fictional.
Pairing: Adam/Kris
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Domestic abuse, violence and swearing.
Notes: Title taken from the song Broken Open by Adam Lambert. The inspiration ( Read more... )

fic: work-in-progress, genre: h/c, type: futurefic, rating: nc-17, genre: angst, author: wicciangirl

Comments 13

yumipitz September 27 2010, 02:55:11 UTC

Nathan should never be given a decent funeral.

Glad to know that everyone's fine now, especially Kris. Sad to see that an officer had to give his life to keep Adam safe. :(

wicciangirl October 1 2010, 02:03:16 UTC

Sorry it took me so long to reply to your comment but I've been overloaded with work since I was ill for a couple of days last weeek. this also means I haven't got part 6B finished yet.
The funeral is going to be a confusing time for everyone and yeah, it was bad that the police officer had to die. I was going to have the officer survive but when I started writing it turned out differently

devilishangel03 September 27 2010, 03:01:24 UTC

i was crying by the end of this. children are precious and should be treated as such. your writing is amazing. i can't wait for the next part.

wicciangirl October 1 2010, 02:05:12 UTC

I'm happy you liked it and at the same time I regret making you cry. The next part will be at least another two days.

cunningdeb September 27 2010, 03:35:46 UTC

oh thank God. I think its time for him and Kris to talk

Deb <33

wicciangirl October 1 2010, 02:05:58 UTC

Adam and Kris will have a proper talk in the next part. Thanks for reading.

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wicciangirl October 1 2010, 02:12:11 UTC

I know it looked pretty bad at the end of the last chapter but I couldn't let Kris die. I try not to write any fics that have one of the boys dying, of course if I'm in a funk the stories can be a little dark.
Nathan had to go and it would have been against his nature to let the police arrest him.

pinkeurogirl September 27 2010, 17:24:41 UTC

nathan got what he deserved. now adam and kris need to talk

wicciangirl October 1 2010, 02:15:01 UTC

The boys will sit down and have that all important talk and I'm happy you liked how I dealt with Nathan. Thank you for letting me know you like this fic..